by Patr1ck on Thu Jul 17, 2008 2:02 am
Good texture quality, but here are some improvements that I think should be made.
The eyebrows are too far from each other and too high.
The nose is too far up and too small.
The mouth should be wider and the mustache should go around the top of his lips, and the gap between his top lip and nose should be smaller.
His head should be more square then it is round.
You should use a different headshape, it doesn't look like you are using the default headshape.
Great job for a first try, though. Hope you make some improvements.