A Story With Basketball

by **Jing** on Mon Jan 23, 2006 5:10 am

hm stern must not have learned english in america, probably in schmucksville. or something

by **balcombebluedevils** on Mon Jan 23, 2006 6:14 am

this is stupid (N)

by **ripmacdre** on Mon Jan 23, 2006 6:31 am

sorry u don't like it. but it seem's like everyone else does. i promise it to get more interesting when the basketball really starts. but, i don't care if u read it or not because i got other people that like it.

by **Cable** on Mon Jan 23, 2006 6:32 am

It's a cool idea, I'm waiting to see how you incorporate basketball into it (Y)

by **ripmacdre** on Mon Jan 23, 2006 6:50 am

Later, Zane met up with David Stern.

Stern : So you got out alive, huh?

Zane : What's it look like? So are you serious about this whole NBA deal?

Stern : Very. So, which team would you like to go to? Cleveland, is it?

Zane : Well, if it's not to much to ask, I would like to select some teams, play a few game's with them, and see who I work with best.

Stern : Hmm... That's do-able. But, of course it can't be in the reagular NBA season, it'll have to be a few game's untelavised.

Zane : Yeah, I know. So, what team seem's to want me the most?

Stern : Everybody. I suggest you pick a team that's not entirely bad, a team that has potential : Atlanta, Cleveland, Seattle, Lakers, Clippers, a team like that. So, I'll have to know now, pick the team's you wish to practice with.

Zane : Umm... Lakers, Cavaliers, Sonics, Clippers, Bobcats, Hawks, T'Wolves, and... Phoenix.

Stern : Okay, you will play one game each with them. Also, one on one games with the star's from the teams. I will have someone there recording your stats. Whoever you do well with, you can go to that team. How's that sound?

Zane : Good.

by **AlwaysWhat,NeverWhy** on Mon Jan 23, 2006 6:55 am

I'm 13 years old, and just started writing, so go easy on me.

Nice start. Just a tip from an ex-writer ... ( or attempted one, at least... )

Use more description of situations instead of just dialogue.

E.g. Zane went there, did that, then though about something else... on and on. :wink:

by **ripmacdre** on Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:14 am

D-Weaver wrote:
I'm 13 years old, and just started writing, so go easy on me.

Nice start. Just a tip from an ex-writer ... ( or attempted one, at least... )

Use more description of situations instead of just dialogue.

E.g. Zane went there, did that, then though about something else... on and on.

- Yeah, good tip. I'll do that (No sarcasam)

by **ripmacdre** on Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:26 am

* For those of you who don't get the last post, I put Zane with the teams listed below. I played one game each with them. Then, I recorded his stats in those games. I played on Superstar, with 12 Minute Quarters. Here's how he did with the team's I put him with.

Lakers - 27 points / 8 Rebounds / 9 Steals / 4 Block's
Cavaliers : 52 points / 10 Rebounds / 13 Steals/ 2 Block's
Sonics : 33 Points / 0 Rebounds / 2 Steals / 0 Block's
Clippers - 27 Points / 1 Rebound / 7 Steals / 9 Block's
Bobcats - 49 Points / 7 Rebounds / 4 Steals / 6 Block's
Atlanta - 50 Point's / 5 Rebounds / 9 Steals / 1 Block
Minnesota - 33 Points / 13 Rebounds / 18 Steals / 11 Block's
Phoneix - 22 Points / 4 Rebounds / 3 Steals / 0 Block's

I think he did best with the Cavaliers, and worst with Phoneix.

by **ShAuN** on Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:36 am

THis is good, but turning into alittle bit too unrealistic. Good job though

by **ripmacdre** on Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:55 am

*Please don't give me hell for this. I know the created player I made is maybe to good, but just go with it. Be honest, would you see any player with the total rating of 60 or 70 something being drafted from high school? No.

Anyways, here are his BIO, and his Ratings.

BIO
First Name - Zane
Last Name - Jones
Birth Year - 1989
Birth Month - December
Birthday - 17
Birth City - Oakland
Birth State - California
Primary Position - Shooting Guard
Secondary Position - Small Forward
Hand - Right
Team - Lakers
Jersey Number - 7
School - N/A

RATINGS
Field Goals - 97
3 Poniters - 99
Free Throws - 76
Dunking - 86
Inside Scoring - 67
Jumping - 79
Strength - 89
Quickness - 93
Speed - 99
Passing - 89
Dribbling - 86
Off. Awareness - 84
Def. Rebounds - 82
Stamina - 99
Hardiness - 71
New Lakers Rating - 90

by **ripmacdre** on Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:55 am

*Please don't give me hell for this. I know the created player I made is maybe to good, but just go with it. Be honest, would you see any player with the total rating of 60 or 70 something being drafted from high school? No.

Anyways, here are his BIO, and his Ratings.

BIO
First Name - Zane
Last Name - Jones
Birth Year - 1989
Birth Month - December
Birthday - 17
Birth City - Oakland
Birth State - California
Primary Position - Shooting Guard
Secondary Position - Small Forward
Hand - Right
Team - Lakers
Jersey Number - 7
School - N/A

RATINGS
Field Goals - 97
3 Poniters - 99
Free Throws - 76
Dunking - 86
Inside Scoring - 67
Jumping - 79
Strength - 89
Quickness - 93
Speed - 99
Passing - 89
Dribbling - 86
Off. Awareness - 84
Def. Rebounds - 82
Stamina - 99
Hardiness - 71
New Lakers Rating - 90

by **ripmacdre** on Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:55 am

*Please don't give me hell for this. I know the created player I made is maybe to good, but just go with it. Be honest, would you see any player with the total rating of 60 or 70 something being drafted from high school? No.

Anyways, here are his BIO, and his Ratings.

BIO
First Name - Zane
Last Name - Jones
Birth Year - 1989
Birth Month - December
Birthday - 17
Birth City - Oakland
Birth State - California
Primary Position - Shooting Guard
Secondary Position - Small Forward
Hand - Right
Team - Lakers
Jersey Number - 7
School - N/A

RATINGS
Field Goals - 97
3 Poniters - 99
Free Throws - 76
Dunking - 86
Inside Scoring - 67
Jumping - 79
Strength - 89
Quickness - 93
Speed - 99
Passing - 89
Dribbling - 86
Off. Awareness - 84
Def. Rebounds - 82
Stamina - 99
Hardiness - 71
New Lakers Rating - 90

by **ripmacdre** on Mon Jan 23, 2006 10:56 am

*Please don't give me hell for this. I know the created player I made is maybe to good, but just go with it. Be honest, would you see any player with the total rating of 60 or 70 something being drafted from high school? No.

Anyways, here are his BIO, and his Ratings.

BIO
First Name - Zane
Last Name - Jones
Birth Year - 1989
Birth Month - December
Birthday - 17
Birth City - Oakland
Birth State - California
Primary Position - Shooting Guard
Secondary Position - Small Forward
Hand - Right
Team - Lakers
Jersey Number - 7
School - N/A

RATINGS
Field Goals - 97
3 Poniters - 99
Free Throws - 76
Dunking - 86
Inside Scoring - 67
Jumping - 79
Strength - 89
Quickness - 93
Speed - 99
Passing - 89
Dribbling - 86
Off. Awareness - 84
Def. Rebounds - 82
Stamina - 99
Hardiness - 71
New Lakers Rating - 90

by **ripmacdre** on Mon Jan 23, 2006 12:02 pm

Sorry for posting so much, accident. What does everyone think sof ar? I'm going to start games sometime tonight. While I'm playing them, please give me some feedback.

by **Jugs** on Mon Jan 23, 2006 12:05 pm

This guy is better than Kobe :crazy:

[gay]Um, that is like TOTALLY un-realistic girlfriend[/gay]

by **Jing** on Mon Jan 23, 2006 12:07 pm

4 posts... (N)

i know nlsc is slow, but the more times you press the submit button the more of the same post you are gonna have

by **ripmacdre** on Mon Jan 23, 2006 12:31 pm

sorry. i thought my computer was froze, so i pressed the submit button a lot.

So you guy's don't want me to go on with my Dynasty?

Just so you know, I have ths story planned out, and his rating's become a major part, turning the story realistic. Like I said in the beginning, you just have to keep reading, because you never know what will happen.

Not to many people are following the story. Should I quit the story, or keep going?

by **Jugs** on Mon Jan 23, 2006 12:39 pm

keep going, I want to see this "realistic" thing you're gonna come up with

by **ripmacdre** on Mon Jan 23, 2006 12:46 pm

okay. but not tonight. i have to go to bed because i have to go to school tomorrow and it's late. good night. and i'll start going sometime... the latest would be saturday but i might get a few post's in before that. good night.

by **Cable** on Mon Jan 23, 2006 1:22 pm

Keep it up (Y)

I'd like to see where this is going ... if it doesn't end up dynasty-ish enough it can always be moved to General Talk, it's a good story.

by **killer_cr0ss0ver** on Mon Jan 23, 2006 1:46 pm

whoah man.. take it easy.. quadruple post, my goodness, whats wrong with u....

by **ripmacdre** on Tue Jan 24, 2006 1:45 am

I'm thinking about picking a diferent team to go into Dynasty with. I don't wanna go with Lakers because of Kobe. He suck's at PG and I think Zane need's to go to a team with a good PF like Minnesota (Kevin Garnett) or Charlotte (Emeka Okafor) or a good C like Denver (Marcus Camby) Check for another poll asking which team I should go with. It will be labeled ''Recount''. It won't involve the Lakers. Thanks and make sure you look for the post. Get the word out, because I want a team up to 100 percent before I start. First team to 100 I will go with, no matter who it is. Thank you!

by **Jing** on Tue Jan 24, 2006 3:13 am

made up your damn mind and stop making random threads asking for help. at least put em in dynasty issues cause technically our voting on your team is not a story.

by **balcombebluedevils** on Tue Jan 24, 2006 7:58 am

ripmacdre wrote:okay. but not tonight. i have to go to bed because i have to go to school tomorrow and it's late. good night.

Good night child :twisted:

by **ripmacdre** on Tue Jan 24, 2006 9:28 am

Many of you seem to be getting mad because I'm trying to find out what kind of story you guy's want. Well, I'm going with Charlotte. They are a young team, and I can make them into winners.

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