It's really bad. You have
really regressed. Because I care I wnet back a whole two pages to find the last sig in which you got better.
Look. You have some decent multi-colouring, the text is very good, and the only problem is the size of the thing (this would also fix the repetitiveness). Just try and make sure you're always improving, or taking steps to improving. Now you're back to the same thing you did before the Duhon sig...just worse.