by cyanide on Sat Aug 27, 2005 12:44 pm
I really like the effects in the background, it's really sweet. The cropping could be better (takes a lot of patience) for the player, but you obviously put a lot of work into it. The Joradn in the centre is a good idea, except it doesn't work so well when you have a white line cutting him in half

Experiment with other types of fonts, and try to make alignments to make a stronger structural feel. Other than that, you're on the right track! For a rookie, you have potential

if you were killed tomorrow, i WOULDNT GO 2 UR FUNERAL CUZ ID B N JAIL 4 KILLIN THE MOTHA FUCKER THAT KILLED U!
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