by Big J RUD on Sat Jan 21, 2006 5:30 am
Atlanta - away, too pink
- home, side bits too pink
- alternate, Yellow needs to be closer to orange and so the shadowy bits are and yellow/orangey colour(maybe set layer style to colour dodge or colour burn or one of those)
Boston - Home and Away
- Alternate trims are off at the top they disappear
Charlotte - Away, go with either pink (darkish colour close to red) or orange(more red than the latest on though) because it changes from different angles and both would be acceptable
- Home, wordmark same colour as the one you use for the away jersey, and same for the orange on the trims collars side bits, etc...
- Alt, stick to the original one you posted on page 4
Chicago - Away, Less pink and use that trick i told you on msn to get shine.
- Home,good texture neck collar off a bit tho.
- Alt, Great i love it
Cleveland - I'm happy with all the ones posted on page 4, but i can't see the side bits, if they arent shiny make them shiny for authenticity.
Dallas - Home and AWay, good but nba logo on jersey is too fat
- Alt, the triangle on the neck is too low can see blue above it, blue is too royal for me, bit darker maybe and a bit less saturation, a bit!
Denver - Away, use the msn thing agen on that colour i think it would look good, wordmark is too bold a font for it(same for home jersey)
- Home, nlue on wordmark less saturated.
- Alt, make the shiny bits lighter so it looks more silky like.
Detroit - The red for all of them is a touch too pink just a touch tho, but great other than that.
Golden State - all of them, don't think they are shiny enough, and i dont't like the trims, especially on the home and away, i changed the neck type and fixed them on mine.
- away, more saturation in the orange on the side, not bad other wise.
- home, wordmark looks too small, and side bits orange is too unsaturated aswell.
- alt, don't like the testure and the colour at all, needs more shine maybe from the msn trick thing.
Houston - away, too pink should be more like mine imo, lol.
- home, red its same too pink as is on the alt jersey, pretty good otherwise.
Clippers - home, good but side bits hsould be a lil bit shiny
- away, red is too pink, should be just default red i reckon, and trims are a bit bright, and shiny side bits also.
- alt, pretty good to me, maybe a tiny bit less saturated on the blue.
Lakers - wordmark is wrong on all of them, im sure you already know that.
Memphis - all, side bits should be shiny, and the curved out bit at the bottom should come a little bit further to the front, check gettyimages.com for reference, also the triangle on the collar is too low like on the mavs alt.
Miami - away, might need to be darker, the rst are fine i reckon.
Minnesota - Away, blue is too dark, rest are fine.
New Orleans - Away don't like texture, and colour should be more pale, less saturated, and i presume you have used hornets wordmark deliberately although only the home jersey has it and the other still say New Orleans.
Philly - is all good!
Phoenix - away, dont like that wordmark looks a bit unsharp.
- alt, wordmark should be arched, it is bulged i think atm, the white bit on the collar is too thick it gets blurred and looks bad, and similar situation for the others.
Portland - all, the lines running across the jersey should have a greater angle underneath them, the numbers need to be smaller, extract portserd_size.fsh from portserd.viv and rename it portaway_size.fsh, and then do the same thing again but this time rename it as porthome_size.fsh that'll make the nums on the home and away jersey the same as the alt for release and whoever does the prev. next time for you.
- alt, neck looks funny maybe its just randolph's fat neck, lmao.
Sacramento - alt, needs to be darker more saturated and shinier.others are good.
San Antonio - all good, dunno bout shiny alt but that was your choice, i guess you can't have a good not shiny grey jersey.
Seattle - I'd like the wordmark to be bigger so that it makes the loopy thing thicker too, and shiny side bits and loopy bit.
- alt, yellow needs shadowy bits to be kind of orangey-yellow like atlanta alternate.
- away, green to be darker.
Torornto - alt, brighter red would be better imo, great otherwise.
Indiana - good home and away
- alt, maybe make the side bits a different colour, and prev them i'd like to see how that looks.
Utah - away, blue should be darker and more navy blue.
- alt, i dunno about that logo i'd prefer the UTAH from the away.
Washington - Away, blue should be more like my wiz away colour, same on the side bit on the home.
- the wordmark on all of them should be different, the right side of the W should be shorter more in line with the I but a bit above it, use EA's as reference.
Milwaukee - good
New Jersey - away, wordmark should be flatter.
- all, mesh holes on half you know, like EA's.
Orlando - good stuff
New York - home and away, i dont like the wordmark, its not quite right, good otherwise.