A Long Short Story [e-novel]CHAPTER 19 kent's nYt OuT

visuals is whats keepin the readers at the height of enlightenment.....next to the porn anticipation that is

next to the porn anticipation that is

speaking of which...


Anyway, maybe I'll start my own e-novel as well... I'll do an interactive realay one, where one continues the story where the previous one left off... it's interesting to see where it finally leads too...

well you wouldn't be the author out of it but i'll be contributing....
anyways i have decided i'll put in few hot steamy moments in this novel.....you guys persuation for me to do it really pays off .......depends on my mood...cause right now my life is a living hell..so we'll never know.sit tight and enjoy

CHAPTER 11: the resto


5 PM and kentaru was awaken by the alarm of his digital watch. He pulls the watch into his side and presses the button to trigger the snooze function. He then slowly turns around to check at chinky. He saw chinky’s arm covering her eyes. All that kentaru notices was chinky’s armpits. He was thinking at trying to tickle them. He grins with anticipation when suddenly the girl utters some words.

Chinky: kent [groans slightly] is it 5 yet?

Kent: yep I thought you’re gonna get some more snoozing so I didn’t wake you up just yet.

Chinky: we are going to hit traffic if we don’t rush…[sighs] okay 5 more minutes and we must be up. Okay?
Kent: roger that.

The whole time kentaru was looking at chinky. And minutes later he decided to go on the sink to wash his face. When he gets back at the bedroom chinky was already up and tidying the bed.
15 minutes after they were outside waiting for a taxi ride to the great market market place where chinky’s favorite restaurant is located. Kentaru marveled at the place, as it was huge with lots of stores and shops to check out with.

Kentaru: so this is the new mall you were telling me. Nice. Very nice indeed.

Chinky: yep my cousin works here and so is couple of my friends. But I guess they’re at the mall’s office so we can’t bother them.

Kent: yeah you’re prolly right. What stores do you occasionally hang out?

Chinky: that reminds me, I want to bring you in this cool place, now come on follow me.

They both went to the third level where the gaming and arcades are located. Chinky escorted kentaru inside and they approach this small booth at the corner.

Chinky: this is a singing booth kent. I used to sing a lot and make record CD’s for a mere 2 bucks. Now the price is 2.50 but it is worth a try.

Kent: you want me to sing? Oh girl you don’t want this whole place to empty when the people hear my awful voice.

Chinky: oh come on don’t be such a killjoy. I’ll start with one song and you’ll do the other. The CD is good for 2 songs only okay?

Chinky started placing the headsets and started to sing her chosen song. Many times she was smiling at kentaru and the guy just smiled back. In the back of his head he was thinking what song will he try to sing so he’ll avoid embarrassing himself in front of chinky. Chinky chose the song titled “Everlasting Flame” it was pretty simple and the girl showed skills hitting the high notes.

Chinky: [after singing] now you try kent, what song will you do?

Kentaru: after you just sang I thought you’re going for the second.[laughs] you are so emote with that song. Maybe I’ll try a bon jovi song. “I’ll be there for you” seems sweet enough.

As kentaru started singing he tried his best to make the song fun, he tried hitting the high key extremely funny sounding as to make chinky laugh out hard.

Chinky:[after the bon jovi song] sorry kent but to be honest with you that was one hell of a worst record you just pulled!

Kent: that’s the irony, the first one is from a diva sensation, the second track is from a rock disaster.[picks up the CD outside the booth]

After the singing they played a few arcades, they then check out some stores available, and then looks up for some display. Basically after 2 hours of shopping they both decided to eat. Chinky went straight just outside into the big seafood restaurant she is eagerly anticipating about. After they order they both seem quite and is staring hard at each other.

Kent: so you like shrimps that much eh? Wont you try the squid I order?[ trying to break into a conversation of some sort]

Chinky: maybe but you have to try one of the crabs I ordered too.

Kent: no prob.

After about 30 minutes kentaru ordered a few wine shots and they started to chat again about the company they are working and their soon to be partnership.

Kent: you know chin, I am excited to work with you and your boss

Chinky: why is that?

Kentaru: well I don’t know, I just felt like it. Anyways I’m so full right now that I can’t sleep early. But my legs are killing me already. If you have no other place in mind I say we go back to your place.

Chinky: yeah that would be a good idea, I’d like to give it a rest now. I have my day today. Thanks kent. You are such a sweet companion. Let’s get the bill and we’ll head off back at the apartment.

CHAPTER 12: booze before snooze

Tuesday night 9:46 PM kentaru and chinky arrived at chinky’s apartment. Once again they pass the bar just beside the lobby next to the elevator.

Kent: hey chin… wanna grab a few shots before we head off upstairs?

Chin: you want some beer? Sorry but I don’t drink beers.

Kent: how about vodka then? scotch or gin tonic?

Chin: here’s the deal kent, grab a bottle of gin tonic. I’ll head off to the pad first and prepare the glasses. The bar is filled with cigarette smoke. It’s not good for me for my condition you know.


Kent: okay. Your place will be good. A little privacy for a change. [Grins devilishly]

So chinky hits the elevator and kentaru went to the bar. A lady bartender attended to him. She was something at the age of 30. Looks stunning and with a great Latina heat body. She smiled boldly to kentaru as kentaru stares at the drink bottles across the display.

Lady bartender: hey you new here? Have only seen you for a few days.

Kent: oh yeah. I’m with a friend. I’m staying in for a few days. Can you get me a bottle of gin tonic please? Please have it ready mixed and a bucket of ice will do.

Lady bartender: coming right up[gets to work] what’s your name? I’m daisy the sunflower. yep people likes to call me flowery names! [laughs out loud]

Kent: is that so? I’m kentaru. How long have you been working here?

Daisy: more than a decade. I live 4 doors beside chinky’s. I was surprised she finally have a man back at her place. She usually lives alone you know.

Kent: what do you mean usually lives alone? You mean to say there were times she has companions in there?

Daisy: yeah. Her cousin and her brother. Didn’t she tells you about them? [finished mixing up the drinks and handed it to kentaru]

Kent: oh yeah them, I remember now. [pays up to daisy]

Daisy: and yeah before I forgot. There was this good-looking guy from before. But I didn’t get to see him after a few weeks of visiting and staying with her. She told me he was in the same office with her. [laughs] not that you both are an issue already, cause I can tell little kent, that’s why I’m telling these things to you.

Kent: [looks stunned] okay… can you add another bottle of vodka. Just in case.

After that revealing gossip conversation, kent went upstairs and into chinky’s pad. The door was unlocked so he just went straight in. He saw chinky watching TV in her bedroom. Kentaru locks the door and went inside the bedroom.

Chinky: oh spirit drinks. Aren’t we going to have plans for tomorrow?[laughs]

Kent: well I just wanna celebrate with you. Ah chin why didn’t you lock the doors. Anybody could just come in. that’s not pretty safe girl.

Chinky: oh you sound like my mom now. I know you were coming up so I leave it open. Otherwise I’ll have to stand up and open the door for you.

Kent: yeah valid and solid reason.[prepares 2 glasses and handed one to chinky] before I forgot. I get to know the bartender, daisy. She’s living at this floor too. You 2 know each other?

Chinky: a little, I’m surprised she spoke to you. She usually brush off new guys around. Whoa kent, your charms really work well.

After chinky said those words kentaru remain silent and sip to his drink. He was a bit confused as to who is the guy that used to be visiting chinky. Could it be that guy in her office. The guy named Jerry? A lot of things go through his head. He really is intrigue at the whole thing. Soon they began to chat again. For the past 2 hours of drinking, they are now both sober.

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CHAPTER 13: the Last Night

Kentaru was a bit drunk and was feeling so drowsy. 12:56 AM. He checked his watch. Chinky was already closing eyes and was in a very awkward position in bed. Kentaru still wanted to chat, but as he can see the girl is already like a limp potato crouching sideways in the middle half of the bed.

Kent: hey chin. Do you want a hot towel? Or a coffee? Say something? You feel okay? [As he shakes her off and back into position at the bed]

Chin: can you just sleep? I mean we sleep. You and me sleeping together whooopie. Tee hee hee. [Sounds like she has a bit too much gin to go]

Kent: okay but you haven’t change your clothes yet, and you speak funny now. I didn’t know you were so easy to be drunk.

Chin: [sits up] me drunk? Who are you talking to mister? *Hik* the only knock out around here is noone elses but you were. [Falls back straight to her back]

Kent: [laughs] you really speak stupid now. What a dumb dumb. Okay at least lemme get this sandals of yours.

Kentaru takes off chinky’s sandals. He thought for a moment to change her clothes. Then he said to himself that she might think badly of him the next day if that was gonna happen. She might accused her of things. He laughs. After which he positions chinky back in the left side of the bed. He helped her tuck in under the covers. Then he went to the bathroom and gets some warm water at the sink and wet a small towel.

He returned and stares at the clock. 1:37 AM. Damn it’s already Wednesday. He slid the warm towel across chinky’s arm and started rubbing it.

Kent: [whispering] boy. This girls arm really felt fragile. So soft and smooth. These are long arms.

He then proceeded to the other arm. Brushing it with warm towel. Then he pull her hair back and started to use a new towel to clean her face. Slowly at the forehead and then at her cheeks. Then lastly at her neck and the back of her neck. As he did this he looked at chinky’s eyes. They were closed. Yet he can see how attractive her face is. Her neckline looks so smooth and nice to kiss. But most notable of all was her red lips. He didn’t know chinky hits the lipstick but at that moment as only as table lamp light was illuminating the whole bedroom, he can clearly see the redness of chinky’s lips. After finishing the deed, he returns the bowl and towel back in the bathroom. He too washed up a bit and clean himself, brush his teeth and change to his pajamas. As he tuck in the sheets back in bed he saw chinky facing towards him.

The girl is murmuring some words. He can’t understand any of them. Kentaru thought that she might be too drunk, so she must be having a dream. Atleast the girl didn’t throw up. Maybe the warm bath he administered calm the effects of alcohol for chinky. He can’t help but brush chinky’s hair with his fingers. This girl don’t know how lovely she is. He thought. Will I kiss her goodnight tonight? Stroke of questions strum into his mind. Then out of nowhere chinky’s arm flail and hold his biceps, chinky stoop out of postion away from her side of the bed and closer to kentaru. They are now so close to each other. Chinky’s lips were inches away from kentaru’s face. The sweet smell of gin still very evident at her breathe.

CHAPTER 14: the first kiss and a half

Kentaru gets hold of himself. He can’t be serious in kissing chinky. She’s drunk and she’s well kinda cute sleeping. Many thoughts rumble into his mind. The girl is just inches away from his grasp. He slowly tucked in the sheets and turned his back on chinky. Better sleep this one off, he thought. He is drunk himself. Maybe if he closes his eyes everything will be alright. About an hour or two has passed. Kentaru was in deep sleep when he felt an arm hug him across his belly. It was chinky. He awakens as the girl grabs his abs by the shoulder and stuck her face into his upper arm. It took him a big 10 minutes to slowly move a bit and tried talking to chinky.

Kent: hey chin. I cant seem to move right at this position. Get a move on girl. Get back to your place. Hey chin [slowly rides his arms above chinky’s head]

Chinky: hmmmm get back to sleep numbskull. What time is it anyway?

Kent: [checks the neon watch] friggin 4:50 AM. I know we don’t have plans for tomorrow, but can we sleep normal and not bump into each other’s space here? [Sounds rather cautious]

Chin: whatever floats your boat kent: nytynytnyt to you!

After that chinky kisses kentaru on the cheek. She then immediately withdraws her close position and start facing the other side of the bed, away from kentaru. Kentaru being too drunk never minded what had just transpired and closed his eyes and went back to sleep.

It was 7 AM. Kentaru was slightly awaken at a shining light illuminating at the bathroom. Chinky was washing up her face. At this early? He thought. He just shut his eyes again. Although later he felt a warm palm caressing his hair he just went on into dreamland. As if he didn’t care what was happening in the wake world. 10:43 AM kentaru is finally awaken. He sits up, stretch a few rounds and notices that chinky is sleeping still beside him. His head is heavy and the rounds of alcohol last night have really taken its toll. He smiled and touch chinky’s face. The poor girl, he thought. Must have been so drunk. What if he kisses her? This idea of kissing came into his mind when he remembered what happened last night. He slowly creeps into position trying to kiss the girl at her cheek. He closes his eyes then suddenly…

Chin: what are you doing?

Kent: [slowly opens his eyes, his lips pointing like an arrow at chinky’s face, chinky in the other hand is irking away] ahhh… just blowing off the feather in your hair. [Grins]

Chin: what feather? What the hell are you talking about?

Kent: nothing…[guilty as charged] see its gone now.

Chin: weird. Kentaru is weird. [Jumps off the bench] [Then hits kentaru’s head with his palm]

At breakfast they were both seated across each other in the table. Chinky was rather quiet and smiling a lot. While kentaru was just playing around his cereal and coffee. They are both speechless at the moment. But the grins and smiles continue.

a guy not taking advantage of a drunk girl, unlikely story sorry

Edit: i forgot to add that this is a bad story and i mean that in the nicest way possibe but if it was a book i think the only one who would buy it is your mother, and mabye some girl name chinky

Whether it was done intentionally or not, I don't want the words "shadowgrin" on the title of this thread.

I don't want my nick to be associated to a gay e-novel.

I'll let the use of my nick if this part is added to the story:

"...Kentaru and Chinky enjoyed the moment they spent in the coffee shop (Starbucks?). They were having a great time and the two of them can feel within themselves that they are meant for each other. They hold each others hands as their feet play beneath the table, as they are about to kiss, a rambling hobo approached them. The hobo was shouting, "Me Shadowgrin!" Kentaru and Chinky saw that the people around them were dead as they were too preoccupied with their love to notice the massacre that was happening. Terrified, both of them looked at the hobo as he said, "Say hello to my little friend." And the hobo brought out an AK-47 hidden in his jacket. The hobo shouted with conviction, "AK-47, when you have to absolutely, positively kill everyone in the room!

Those were the last words that Kentaru and Chinky heard in their meaningless lives..."

EDIT: I noticed that in the poll, there's only 1 vote for:
I'm dumbstruck and speechless
A lone vote for your own, eh COOLmac?

Chin: weird. Kentaru is weird. [Jumps off the bench] [Then hits kentaru’s head with his palm]

No-one else noticed this?

Can Chinky be revealed to be a man?

Looks like Jae gets his wish

Does a thing called a plot ever exist in this novel? Oh well, it's not like I bothered reading most of it anyway. I was afraid I might have gotten some eye disorder if I read too deeply into the story.

No sex yet?

Fuck this...

you guys pull some crazy shit here......

i think that vote was made by you shadowgrin denial is bad......
anyways when the next chapter kicks in your name wont be there i swear

ChAPtER 15: chinky’s surprise

After a brief breakfast, which almost turned to lunch since it was 11:23 AM chinky started to clean the table. Kentaru helped by taking out the dishes to the washing drain. As kentaru was sorting out the dishes chinky started to talk.

Chinky: hey kent, tomorrow, are you still going to be here?

Kent: yeah Today is Wednesday? Mmm let me see, yup Thursday morning is my sked chin, and I will be heading back to the province, may I ask why you asked?

Chinky: nothing much. Just that tonight I’ll be heading north for my cousin’s place. I think I’m gonna spend the night there too. So if we have time later, I could copy you a spare key at the mall. You are still welcome to spend the night here tonight. Well how’s that?

Kentaru: [speechless and somehow a little bit shock] you didn’t tell me about any of this before. Why am I too bad a companion already? You know from the start I am going to stay till Thursday morn. How am I gonna be doing alone in the city tonight?

Chin: well Lisa[her cuz] said she will pick me up by 11 PM. So I guess we still have plenty of time to venture round the city then. What do you say eh sly boy? Come on. We spend 2 nights together now didn’t we?

Kentaru: whatever. I’m going to steal a lot of stuff here, so beware [grins frantically]

After that kentaru splashes chinky with soap water and they both tried tickling each other around. Later chinky decided to take a shower first. Kentaru was left outside staring at chinky’s cell phone across him by the table. They were both planning to go on a round the city by 2 PM. Kentaru recalls chinky’s smile. Then her cell phone rang. Kentaru saw the caller was Lisa, he yelled at chinky in the shower, but the girl just tells him to answer the phone and tell her cousin that the plan is going through that night.

Kentaru:[answering the phone] hello, good day to you. This is kent speaking, chinky can’t made it to the phone right now. If you would like to leave a message I’ll gladly pass it on to her a little later.

Lisa: oh you must be kentaru, chinky told me a lot about you.

Kent: she did? When?

Lisa: nevermind. [laughs at the background] is she there? Just tell her I’ll give her a ring around 10 to remind her okay? Is it okay she’s staying with me tonight? Or are you two gonna do something together? You got any plans Mr. Kentaru?

Kent: [well yeah duh] ahh not that I can think of Ms. Lisa. okay I’ll tell her then. 10 PM right. It’s perfectly fine for me. Don’t you worry. You take care now okay?

Lisa: oh such fine gentleman. Thanks a bunch kent. Maybe we’ll see each other soon. Okay you take care too now okay. Bye.

Kent: bye

CHAPTER 16: movies and the other guy

It was 12:30. Kent and chinky were already at a taxi going to this classy mall in a nearby city. It was called Shangri-La. Chinky fancied going into girl shops looking into girly things while kentaru happily obliged and accompanied her. Thinking of some sort of strategy to have the girl to settle down since his foot is already aching of walking around the big mall for an hour. He then saw the movie advertisements along one wing of the big mall. Pretty interesting movies to boot there, he thought.

Kent: wait up chin. Aren’t you a bit hungry?

Chin: we just have brunch about 11:30. Now it’s only 1:46 and you are hungry? Man you are one hell of a kitchen guy [grins]

Kent: in that case we’ll go heavy snacks at about 4. Is that okay with you?

Chin: hmmm. What do we right in between? Any ideas? Me. I could just sweep this entire mall for anything. How about you?

Kent: [smiles] what about MOVIES? [Smiles with a devilish grin]

They both ride the elevator to the fifth level of the mall. They went past the arcade entertainment area, then directly into the cinemas. There were 8 cinemas to choose from. Mostly geek films were at play.

Kent: damn 3 cinemas have star wars! [And not a single romantic flick]

Chin: I bet you already seen star wars eh? I like to see comedy but I don’t like to watch Adam sandler. His jokes were mostly green. I don’t want to see Jackie Chan too. What do we have left?

Kent: Angelina jolie! And brad Pitt? Mr. and Mrs. Smith! [Loves his idea]

Chin: sounds great. That’s a good film.

Inside. The aircon was cold. And during the hot steamy scenes of the film kentaru was lurking his eyes and trying to get a glimpse at chinky. He finishes his popcorn first. And later drink all his iced tea up. Eventually chinky cant take all the large popcorn and gave some to kentaru. Kent tried oh so many times rubbing elbows and feeling arms with chinky. Many times he failed. Till the movie ended! They went outside and decided to eat at the nearest Kenny Rogers Roasters restaurant.

Kent: wow that movie is great. Imagine being a hired killer and all, and your wife having the same profession as you?

Chinky: yeah wonder if that ever happen in real life?

Kent: you serious? Of course it can. I know somebody…

A man approached their table and sturdily say something between their conversation.

Jerry: ehem. Mr.Tachibana and Ms. Chinky Lopez. How nice of us to see each other here. How are the 2 of you? I see you are going out, business matters I presume?[ smiles]

Chinky: sorry sir. But would you like to join us?

Kent:[grips Jerry’s hand] yeah pls. Do [disturb us asshole] [sarcastic remarks here]

Jerry: why thank you!

ok so they sleep in the same bed, they get drun together, they go everywhere, they go to the movies, and neither of them makes a god damn move... what the hell is wrong with you?

i like to anger most of the audience around here

EDIT: yeah when i was in my teenage years, gagging girls and pounding them seems easy fun, but hey this is just a story. and stories tend to bend reality not all boy and girl sleeping together do fuck ASAP. maybe in a day or 2. we'll just have to wait thanks for the comments and critism thouh much appreciated

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I bett you in the end one of them dies and they never get to do anything at all.

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CHAPTER 17: the mood is no good

Jerry is still standing at the side table near chinky as kentaru sits backs down.

Jerry: I would like to join you but I have guest to attend to at my table. So I expect to see you then in the morning ms.chinky?

Chinky: sir I think you forgot. I’m going out of town tonight and I wont be reporting till Thursday sir.

Jerry: oh I didn’t know you and kentaru have plans.

Kentaru: actually she is going on a family related trip jerry. I’ll be heading home tomorrow morning.

Jerry: is that so? Well good luck then. I better be going you 2. Enjoy the night now okay. Bye

The guy walks to his table where 2 girls are waiting for him. The girls were very elegantly dress and seems to be looking at kentaru and chinky while talking to jerry at their table. Chinky notices it but decided to look away. Kentaru laughs and ask chin a few questions.

Kent: I don’t know, but I think something is going on with you and your boss jerry. My instincts tell me. But hey who am I to say such things. I’m just a nobody here. Hehehe well is there really something?

Chinky: of course not! That pig wont have anything to do with me ever.

Kent: wow your angry. Anger tells tales my friend.

Chinky: ah shut up. Lets finish the food, I got to be home before 10.

They finish the dinner, made a pass at jerry and the gossip laiden girls and straight to the taxi.

Chapter 18: chinky’s gone


As soon as kentaru and chinky made their way back to the building, chinky went straight into her room and pack the things needed for her out of town trip. It was exactly 10 PM and she was expecting her cousin to be downstairs any moment now. Kentaru just laid back and watch the busy girl running to and fro. Soon he began to speak up

Kent: you sure it is okay with you I’ll spend the final night here alone?

Chinky: I’m so sorry kent. But that’s the way things is going to turn out. I hope you won’t mind?

Kent: nah I don’t mind.

Chinky’s cellphone rang. It was here cousin. Kentaru check from the windows and saw a black car park along the entrance of the building. Chinky went up to kentaru and started to smile.

Chinky: well you got the duplicate keys, and you sure give me a hell of a time these last couple of days. [Gives kent a warm hug]

Kent: yeah chin. You were a great companion, I really enjoyed my time here with you, [pulls chinky’s head backwards holds her chin] you take care now okay? And please do enjoy seeing your outer family. By the time you’ll be back I’ll be back at home, guess I’ll call you then? Thanks for everything And I’ll be seeing you [tries to slowly pull chinky’s head towards his face, while playing with her hair]

Chinky: [motionless] err. Kent. My cousin is downstairs waiting. You and me will still be seeing each other soon okay? Yeah you give me a call. But for now I’ve got to go.

Kentaru: oh yeah you got to go [feeling awkward]

Chinky suddenly gives kentaru a kiss on the cheek. Then she picks up her bag, walk to the door and left. Kentaru was still standing for a big 5 minutes. Nodding his head and feeling empty after chinky left. He decided to sat on the sofa, which was the only comfy thing he can grab on too. The kiss left its mark. He wonders. It was 10 minutes right after chinky left. 10:32PM he felt the urge to go outside and go for a walk to smell some nightly fresh air.

For fucks sakes coolmac.. you still goin on about chinky? I thought this thread died months ago lol.. does she get butt fucked or what?

this will be the next big thing in the novels next to hairy potter

chinky's still a mysterious virgin

this will be the next big thing in the novels next to hairy potter

chinky's still a mysterious virgin

Mysterious virgin = slutty ho