´At airport´
Jonas - " Do good kid, we will miss you. And you better get into NBA, or else" said Jonas to his 19 year old boy, who had decided to try his skills in NBA summer circuit.
Rev - " Ha! I sure hope so, it's time to put Estonia on map in basketball, and i sure hope it would be who does it."
Mary - " Good luck my boy, i know i will be so proud! " said kid's mom and cried joy tears at the same time.
Rev - " Don't worry mom, i will do just fine."
Jonas - " You have the passport, right? "
Rev - " Yes dad, i have it, wouldn't leave home without it. "
Jonas - " Yes, Yes i know. I was just checking. "
´Flight number 6 is leaving, passengers, please come aboard now.´
Rev - " Oh, that's my flight. Bye old-man, bye mom. I will call right after i land. "
Marry - " You better! Do good! "
Jonas - " Hold yourself kid, don't over do yourself! "
Rev - " I know dad, i know. Bye! "
Mary and Jonas - " Bye son. "
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Young someone out of nowhere. reopened...managed to fix it!
by raunts61 on Fri Dec 25, 2009 2:09 am
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Re: Young someone out of nowhere.
by raunts61 on Fri Dec 25, 2009 2:56 am
´Plane lands in Oakland´
`Rev finds the first phone and calls his parents like promised, in a 10 minute talk he said its all good and has to go´
´Rev is greeted by Warriors assistant-coach Russel Turner and take's Rev back to Warriors head quarters´
' At next day´
´At Warriors practice court´
´Don Nelson walks to the court´
Don- As you all know, I'm Don Nelson, your head-coach. Only thing i want from you is hard work and good relation with each other. Can't find that, i go hard on you. That's all i wanted to say right now. Get back to the practice.
´Rev picks his ball up and makes some 3 pointers, Keith Smart walks up to him´
Keith - Kid, your follow through is a bit off. Here i will show you.
Rev- Uh, yeah sure.
´Keith gets the ball from Rev, bounces it few times. Looks at the basket and shoots. And so 4 times.´
Keith- You see, like this. You just need to stretch your hand all out, but you leave it in an angle, all in all its all good. Keep up the work.
Rev- I see, yeah, thanks.
´Rev takes a ball, tries to remember what Keith told him and shoots the ball´
Keith- That's good, yes, good work.
Rev- Oh, yes it feels better, thanks.
Keith - That is why I'm here. Alright now let's see your dunking ability.
Rev - Coming right up. ` Rev has a little smile on his face, picks up the ball, walks behind the 3pt line and starts running. He takes off 1 meter after free-throw line and does a 360.´
Keith - Oh wow, white men can jump, to be honest didn't expect that from a white guy. Nice i like it. You have good elevation.
Rev - Ah, i have always loved dunking. But i have to get back to practice, you heard Don.
Keith - Yes, good, i like your effort.
`Rev finds the first phone and calls his parents like promised, in a 10 minute talk he said its all good and has to go´
´Rev is greeted by Warriors assistant-coach Russel Turner and take's Rev back to Warriors head quarters´
' At next day´
´At Warriors practice court´
´Don Nelson walks to the court´
Don- As you all know, I'm Don Nelson, your head-coach. Only thing i want from you is hard work and good relation with each other. Can't find that, i go hard on you. That's all i wanted to say right now. Get back to the practice.
´Rev picks his ball up and makes some 3 pointers, Keith Smart walks up to him´
Keith - Kid, your follow through is a bit off. Here i will show you.
Rev- Uh, yeah sure.
´Keith gets the ball from Rev, bounces it few times. Looks at the basket and shoots. And so 4 times.´
Keith- You see, like this. You just need to stretch your hand all out, but you leave it in an angle, all in all its all good. Keep up the work.
Rev- I see, yeah, thanks.
´Rev takes a ball, tries to remember what Keith told him and shoots the ball´
Keith- That's good, yes, good work.
Rev- Oh, yes it feels better, thanks.
Keith - That is why I'm here. Alright now let's see your dunking ability.
Rev - Coming right up. ` Rev has a little smile on his face, picks up the ball, walks behind the 3pt line and starts running. He takes off 1 meter after free-throw line and does a 360.´
Keith - Oh wow, white men can jump, to be honest didn't expect that from a white guy. Nice i like it. You have good elevation.
Rev - Ah, i have always loved dunking. But i have to get back to practice, you heard Don.
Keith - Yes, good, i like your effort.
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Re: Young someone out of nowhere.
by raunts61 on Fri Dec 25, 2009 3:28 am
´First summer game of Rev, and it is against Portland´
´He came to the game on 3rd minute of 1st quarter, and right when he got in he got a steal and dunked the ball´
`Shouts of Don were heard on the court´
Don - YES! Good D!
`Rev had 14 points and 5 rebounds at the end of the game as Warriors won the game 64-53´
´Don walks in the dressing room´
Don - Good work guys, good work. Rev, i have one good thing about your game, only one, you can play D but LEARN to pass the ball.
I said relation, hagging the ball isn't relation. One more game like this, and i would suggest quitting if you don't like to get thrown out.
´Rev is stunned´
Rev - But......but..
Don - But nothing. Start passing, or else.
´Rev is still shocked that 14 points and 2 assists isn't good at all and he only saw Defense in his play´
Rev - Yes..... yes sir.
Don - Now, team go get shower and we will see you in tomorrows practice.
´He came to the game on 3rd minute of 1st quarter, and right when he got in he got a steal and dunked the ball´
`Shouts of Don were heard on the court´
Don - YES! Good D!
`Rev had 14 points and 5 rebounds at the end of the game as Warriors won the game 64-53´
´Don walks in the dressing room´
Don - Good work guys, good work. Rev, i have one good thing about your game, only one, you can play D but LEARN to pass the ball.
I said relation, hagging the ball isn't relation. One more game like this, and i would suggest quitting if you don't like to get thrown out.
´Rev is stunned´
Rev - But......but..
Don - But nothing. Start passing, or else.
´Rev is still shocked that 14 points and 2 assists isn't good at all and he only saw Defense in his play´
Rev - Yes..... yes sir.
Don - Now, team go get shower and we will see you in tomorrows practice.
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Re: Young someone out of nowhere.
by Oskar on Fri Dec 25, 2009 3:44 am
raunts61 wrote:it's time to put Estonia on map in basketball
About time, maybe Siim-Sander Vene will manage to do something, but we'll see. Nice writing skills, by the way. You should make a bit longer stories though, add some pictures and all, but it's all solid so far. Good luck.
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Re: Young someone out of nowhere.
by raunts61 on Fri Dec 25, 2009 3:50 am
Oskar wrote:About time, maybe Siim-Sander Vene will manage to do something, but we'll see. Nice writing skills, by the way. You should make a bit longer stories though, add some pictures and all, but it's all solid so far. Good luck.
Thanks...Yeah Vene might be something...and i'll try with the stories and pictures..
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Re: Young someone out of nowhere.
by raunts61 on Fri Dec 25, 2009 4:06 am
´At new apartment´
´Rev looks at his jersey´
Rev - So they gave me number 6, eh ironic. Wasn't my flights number number 6? *Sigh* Anyway Coach told me to start passing. Passing, i guess i can do it. I must do it.
´Puts the jersey into closet´
´Walking to the kitchen , the phone rang´
.......- Hello am i speaking to Rev Goose?
Rev - Yes, I'm Rev.
........- I'm Keith, we changed the schedule of tomorrows practice. It will be 2 pm.
Rev - Ah, thanks.
Keith - Rev, boy, don't let the Don's throwing out talk get to you. He actually likes how you play, he just wants you to improve.
Rev - He does?
Keith - Yes. He thinks you might become something big, at this age with such skills, next Pippen.
Rev - He really said that? He doesn't think i hagg the ball too much?
Keith - No not that, you DO hagg the ball, that wasn't the point of the talk. Geez kid, all i meant is that he will not throw you out of the team, but he want's to see you improve much more than you are right now, and passing is your weakest side.
Rev - Oh, my bad. Passing, i do pass, do i not?
Keith - You really don't you even shoot 3 when your teammate is OPEN at the basket. Just throw the pass.
Rev - *Sigh* It's a must then.
Keith - Yes
Rev - Thanks coach for the info, and good night i must go to sleep.
Keith - Ok kid, be at practice tomorrow then.
Rev - Yes. Night.
Keith - Night.
´Rev looks at his jersey´
Rev - So they gave me number 6, eh ironic. Wasn't my flights number number 6? *Sigh* Anyway Coach told me to start passing. Passing, i guess i can do it. I must do it.
´Puts the jersey into closet´
´Walking to the kitchen , the phone rang´
.......- Hello am i speaking to Rev Goose?
Rev - Yes, I'm Rev.
........- I'm Keith, we changed the schedule of tomorrows practice. It will be 2 pm.
Rev - Ah, thanks.
Keith - Rev, boy, don't let the Don's throwing out talk get to you. He actually likes how you play, he just wants you to improve.
Rev - He does?
Keith - Yes. He thinks you might become something big, at this age with such skills, next Pippen.
Rev - He really said that? He doesn't think i hagg the ball too much?
Keith - No not that, you DO hagg the ball, that wasn't the point of the talk. Geez kid, all i meant is that he will not throw you out of the team, but he want's to see you improve much more than you are right now, and passing is your weakest side.
Rev - Oh, my bad. Passing, i do pass, do i not?
Keith - You really don't you even shoot 3 when your teammate is OPEN at the basket. Just throw the pass.
Rev - *Sigh* It's a must then.
Keith - Yes
Rev - Thanks coach for the info, and good night i must go to sleep.
Keith - Ok kid, be at practice tomorrow then.
Rev - Yes. Night.
Keith - Night.
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Re: Young someone out of nowhere.
by raunts61 on Fri Dec 25, 2009 9:14 am
´At practice court´
´Rev tries to start with the passing in practice´
Rev - "´Man i must pass the pall more.´"
´Rev tries to pass the ball much more than he used to have and in some point he finds Cury totally open, throws an ally-oop pass to Cury and Cury dunks it hard´
Cury - YEAH! Nice ally!
[i]`Rev smiled a bit and pointed his finger at Curry´[/i]
´ Maggette runs past Rev and gives him a lil' elbow ´
Rev - Hey punk, what was that for!
Cory - Shut up, like i did that on purpose!
Rev - Like hell you didn't
Cory - Prove me wrong. You ain't no playa cuz Don likes you. Look out kid, you ain't gettin' my place, Punk!
Rev - Yeah?! Just look me granny.
Cory - Oh no you didn't. I'm going to kill you some day.
Rev - What was that? You, kill...me? HA! F*ck you!
`Don hears the screaming and walks onto the court´
Don - WHAT THE HELL IS THE MATTER IN HERE!!
Cory - This punk tried to injure me
Rev - F*ck you, you know that's not true.
Don - Shut up both of you, get into my room Rev, NOW...Cory you chill out. And get back to practice.
Rev - Wha- ... I didn't do anything.
Don - GET into my room, Now!
´At Don's office´
Don - Kid, what was the first thing i said when i met you guys on this same court, Eh?
Rev - Hard work and relation.
Don - EXACTLY! And.. how exactly is THAT relation.
Rev - Hey coach, he framed me, i wasn't doing anything.
Don - Answer my damn question boy.
Rev - I said i didn't do any-..
Don - ANSWER the question!
Rev - It's not good relation. But i didn't try to injure him.
Don - *Sigh* Kid, Cory, is our star player, and we need him on the Season. You better aren't pulling any tricks on me, our you fly out of here.
Rev - I know, i know. I don't want any troubles , and i swear i didn't do anything.
Don - Alright alright. Get going, the practice is over for you today. Report to the game tomorrow, ready and powerful. And i don't know what is wrong between you and Cory.... But better work it out, ya hear me?
Rev - Yes sir.
´Rev walks out the office and closes the door behind him. Walking by the court he saw Corey laughing at him, but he turned his head away and walked straight to the lockers´
´Rev tries to start with the passing in practice´
Rev - "´Man i must pass the pall more.´"
´Rev tries to pass the ball much more than he used to have and in some point he finds Cury totally open, throws an ally-oop pass to Cury and Cury dunks it hard´
Cury - YEAH! Nice ally!
[i]`Rev smiled a bit and pointed his finger at Curry´[/i]
´ Maggette runs past Rev and gives him a lil' elbow ´
Rev - Hey punk, what was that for!
Cory - Shut up, like i did that on purpose!
Rev - Like hell you didn't
Cory - Prove me wrong. You ain't no playa cuz Don likes you. Look out kid, you ain't gettin' my place, Punk!
Rev - Yeah?! Just look me granny.
Cory - Oh no you didn't. I'm going to kill you some day.
Rev - What was that? You, kill...me? HA! F*ck you!
`Don hears the screaming and walks onto the court´
Don - WHAT THE HELL IS THE MATTER IN HERE!!
Cory - This punk tried to injure me
Rev - F*ck you, you know that's not true.
Don - Shut up both of you, get into my room Rev, NOW...Cory you chill out. And get back to practice.
Rev - Wha- ... I didn't do anything.
Don - GET into my room, Now!
´At Don's office´
Don - Kid, what was the first thing i said when i met you guys on this same court, Eh?
Rev - Hard work and relation.
Don - EXACTLY! And.. how exactly is THAT relation.
Rev - Hey coach, he framed me, i wasn't doing anything.
Don - Answer my damn question boy.
Rev - I said i didn't do any-..
Don - ANSWER the question!
Rev - It's not good relation. But i didn't try to injure him.
Don - *Sigh* Kid, Cory, is our star player, and we need him on the Season. You better aren't pulling any tricks on me, our you fly out of here.
Rev - I know, i know. I don't want any troubles , and i swear i didn't do anything.
Don - Alright alright. Get going, the practice is over for you today. Report to the game tomorrow, ready and powerful. And i don't know what is wrong between you and Cory.... But better work it out, ya hear me?
Rev - Yes sir.
´Rev walks out the office and closes the door behind him. Walking by the court he saw Corey laughing at him, but he turned his head away and walked straight to the lockers´
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Re: Young someone out of nowhere.
by raunts61 on Fri Dec 25, 2009 6:23 pm
´Hour before the game in the locker´
Don - Right guys, i will tell today's starting five. Center.....Hall....Power Forward.....Wilson....Small forward...Uh..you better make something of it..Rev Goose...Shooting Guard....Fuller...and Point Guard...Law
Rev - "´What...i got to start?! Man that's good, i can prove myself"´
Don - Hard work and good relation on the court. Go get them tigers.
TEAM - YEAH!!
Don - On three. Go Warriors.
Don - One......Two...Three.
TEAM - Goooooooo WARRIORS!!!
Don - Right, go do the warm up.
´ESPN´
Matt - I have some news now. 79 - 42. With these numbers ended the game of Warriors vs Timberwolves. The biggest numbers were put up by a guy out of nowhere.
Tim - Yes, young guy from Estonia. Rev Goose, he put up great numbers today.
Matt - 33 points, 7 rebounds and 4 assists.
Tim - Hes playing style resembles " King's ".
Matt - Yeah i saw the same game soul in Rev as i see it in James.
Tim - Yeah, but we can't expect him to grow into new King of basketball.
Matt - You are right. He is good at this age, but his passing game needs to improve.
Tim - Yes, 4 assists for forward is good, don't get me wrong, but his passing skills and accuracy needs improving. Hes today's defense was bad tho. He let his guy dump 15 points on him.
Matt - Considering he put 33 points himself its not that bad, but still.
Tim - Curry had a decent night as well with 19 points.
Matt - Not only good game from those two. Law showed good passing. 12 assists. And we all know how Don Nelson likes passing game more than anything.
Tim - That's true. He is very pleased with his team's tonight's play.
Matt - I pet he is.
Don - Right guys, i will tell today's starting five. Center.....Hall....Power Forward.....Wilson....Small forward...Uh..you better make something of it..Rev Goose...Shooting Guard....Fuller...and Point Guard...Law
Rev - "´What...i got to start?! Man that's good, i can prove myself"´
Don - Hard work and good relation on the court. Go get them tigers.
TEAM - YEAH!!
Don - On three. Go Warriors.
Don - One......Two...Three.
TEAM - Goooooooo WARRIORS!!!
Don - Right, go do the warm up.
´ESPN´
Matt - I have some news now. 79 - 42. With these numbers ended the game of Warriors vs Timberwolves. The biggest numbers were put up by a guy out of nowhere.
Tim - Yes, young guy from Estonia. Rev Goose, he put up great numbers today.
Matt - 33 points, 7 rebounds and 4 assists.
Tim - Hes playing style resembles " King's ".
Matt - Yeah i saw the same game soul in Rev as i see it in James.
Tim - Yeah, but we can't expect him to grow into new King of basketball.
Matt - You are right. He is good at this age, but his passing game needs to improve.
Tim - Yes, 4 assists for forward is good, don't get me wrong, but his passing skills and accuracy needs improving. Hes today's defense was bad tho. He let his guy dump 15 points on him.
Matt - Considering he put 33 points himself its not that bad, but still.
Tim - Curry had a decent night as well with 19 points.
Matt - Not only good game from those two. Law showed good passing. 12 assists. And we all know how Don Nelson likes passing game more than anything.
Tim - That's true. He is very pleased with his team's tonight's play.
Matt - I pet he is.
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Re: Young someone out of nowhere.
by raunts61 on Fri Dec 25, 2009 7:57 pm
´ESPN´
Matt - Warriors went off for an other big game tonight. 80-56 they beat Oklahoma City Thunders. Biggest factor for Warriors was Curry's 26 points.
Tim - We can't forget Laws great passing game again. 11 dimes.
Matt - Yes, law had an other great assist night. Also 3pt shots. 3 guys went 10/14 tonight. 4 from Curry, 3 from Goose and 3 from Fuller.
Tim - Yeah, Rev Goose, player from Estonia, had an other great night. 18 points and incredible 10 rebounds from small forward position.
Matt - We also know hoe Don was always critic about his passing game. But tonight his passing game was good.
Tim - Yes, and we have a call with Don Nelson himself.
´Don on the big screen and talks through phone´
Don - Hey guys.
Matt and Tim - Hello.
Matt - How did you like your teams effort today.
Don - Great, 80 points, i mean great game by my guys tonight.
Matt - You didn't start Goose and Curry tonight. Why?
Don - Well they are good players, but i had to give other fellows some playing time.
Tim - We know how you didn't like Rev's passing game. Did he show better game today?
Don - Rev put on a show today with Curry and Law. I think last game he misunderstood me. We talked and he thought it was all about assists, but no. It's so much more. I wasn't on his neck cuz of assists, but because passing in total. Today he moved the ball great and that's what i want from my players.
Matt - What do you think of your opponents play tonight.
Don - Great group of players. Harden is going to grow into great player in time and as well Westbrook. He has nose for big plays. But tonight we out played him.
Tim - What do you think about your next opponents? Huston Rockets.
Don - Rockets have good players, but they lack the relation on court that our guys have. I think we can beat them.
Tim - Confident words from confident Coach. Thanks for the time. I wish you guys luck.
Don - Thank you and good night.
Matt - Good night.
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Re: Young someone out of nowhere.
by raunts61 on Fri Dec 25, 2009 8:45 pm
* CLOSED due save fail error *
Scratch that...save is all good
Scratch that...save is all good
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Re: Young someone out of nowhere.
by KB24. on Fri Dec 25, 2009 8:50 pm
I just wanted to post that good story and hope you can make it to NBA. But too bad that your game crashed.
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Re: Young someone out of nowhere.
by raunts61 on Fri Dec 25, 2009 10:22 pm
KB24. wrote:I just wanted to post that good story and hope you can make it to NBA. But too bad that your game crashed.
thanks...i got it fixed..i will continue it still ...
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Re: Young someone out of nowhere. reopened...managed to fix it!
by Martti. on Sun Dec 27, 2009 1:29 am
Rev Goose is not a very Estonian name. 
Just create Siim-Sander Vene. I'll follow.
Just create Siim-Sander Vene. I'll follow.
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Re: Young someone out of nowhere. reopened...managed to fix it!
by raunts61 on Sun Dec 27, 2009 2:39 am
Lol... i thought Estonian name ..would just sound wrong for guys in this forum..so i decided something else
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