Screens have to wait for next month? I find that they make up for my lack of photoshop, cause it makes no difference.
For suggestions: READ THE NBA LIVE WIKI! Tells you what you can put on there, very useful.
The NBA Live Wiki wrote:Dynasty Stories generally contain a mixture of the following elements:
-Game Recaps
-Boxscores
-Player & Team Statistics
-Season Standinfs & Playoff Matchups
-Screenshots
-Diaries/Blogs
-Recaps and coverage of annual events (such as the Draft and All-Star Weekend)
-Fictional Feature Articles
-Fictional Magazine Covers
Also, like the others said, cut down on the font size and colour, no need to use large font to make up for a lack of other things

. Anyway, you don't have a box score, recaps are as in-depth as a pitcure book, the only stat you have is for Jason Kapono (who is now a Raptor, anyway), screens are apparently coming next month

, so all in all, I would say that it is very good, ranking 13th out of the 13 active topics in this forum, not a bad start, considering you are, after all, McDwyane.
Oh, and make it so it's worth reading. I can make one of this in ten minutes, and I don't even have Live 07. You haven't posted anything that can't be made up.