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Postby Slizz on Thu Nov 01, 2007 4:59 am

nice writing. last time I didn't follow your dynasty cause I didn't want to read everything that happened before I had a look at your story but now I'm in from the beginning and I really like it thus far...
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Postby Lamrock on Thu Nov 01, 2007 6:13 am

Yes! A continuation from A Legend Is born it looks like! I hereby already nominate this for dynasty of the year.
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Postby IceCold on Thu Nov 01, 2007 7:29 am

I am new one,I dont like dynasties too much,but this one is special...I ll be following you franchise,good luck (Y)
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Postby Fresh8 on Thu Nov 01, 2007 9:47 am

Boomdizzle wrote:abstract... but interesting


Thanks bro!

slizz wrote:nice writing. last time I didn't follow your dynasty cause I didn't want to read everything that happened before I had a look at your story but now I'm in from the beginning and I really like it thus far...


I hope you stay on board for a good ride then! :D

Lamrock wrote:Yes! A continuation from A Legend Is born it looks like! I hereby already nominate this for dynasty of the year.


Haha, I'm glad you recognised some of the names... I loved the characters I created in Ty, Rocky and Moses so didn't wanna put them to waste... not really a continuation but yeah... the characters and their backgrounds are the same. So the three I've mentioned didn't enter the NBA which makes them Juniors... I think I had Moses as older in my other story but I'm making him the same ages as the others in this one. Hope you guys like the new guy, Anthony Moten.

IceCold wrote:I am new one,I dont like dynasties too much,but this one is special...I ll be following you franchise,good luck


Thanks a lot dude. Hope you enjoy the read. :D
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Postby Fresh8 on Fri Nov 02, 2007 7:52 am

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Postby Xiphias on Fri Nov 02, 2007 8:02 am

this is nice one (Y)
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Postby Fresh8 on Fri Nov 02, 2007 10:53 am

Thanks Xiphias
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Postby Chaser7 on Fri Nov 02, 2007 10:56 am

Sit, I read your entire legends 1 thing last week, and it is very very good. It got a little unbelievable and weird at times, but very entertaining nevertheless. I was however confused about what was actually going on in the game though sicne I skipper everything but the story. How did you switch from the Hawks to the Wolves? were you actually never ever part of the Hawks and it was just story? Anyways good luck can't wiat for part 2!
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Postby Fresh8 on Fri Nov 02, 2007 10:59 am

Nah, I got fired from the Hawks. Maybe I resigned. And then I went to Minnesota.

But yeh, I won't have a character by my name in this one. Hope you enjoy the read. (Y)
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Postby Chaser7 on Fri Nov 02, 2007 11:04 am

Wait how do you actually switch franchises in the game? DId you like edit the .dbf or something?
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Postby Fresh8 on Fri Nov 02, 2007 11:09 am

Thats my secret. (Y) haha

So, what do you think of the new story so far?

I'm guessing everyone figured who the guy in the prologue was?
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Postby Chaser7 on Fri Nov 02, 2007 11:13 am

yea Reyshaun... Were you losing the Timberwolve games on purpose? Why did you make Chara younger now, why not just use a new character as the sohpmore on duke? Being a star sohpmore vs star freshmen is not the same type of matchup as star young freshman vs star polished senior...
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Postby Fresh8 on Fri Nov 02, 2007 11:17 am

Yeh well, I wanted to keep Moses in the story... I didnt know how to since he was a senior two years before this. For sure, freshman v senior is a much more enticing scenario. Any ideas on how I should do it?

Cause now that Ty and Rocky are juniors... well, I think it should make sense once I post the next chapter! Things should get interesting.

Nah, the 'he' isn't Reshawn! :D
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Postby Lamrock on Fri Nov 02, 2007 11:45 am

Its still Kobe. Watch.
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Postby Fresh8 on Fri Nov 02, 2007 11:58 am

Lamrock... possibly.

Oh yeah guys... Originally, I was gonna make Moses Chara a fifth year senior who redshirted his freshman year... but not gonna change it as chapter 2 has some key plot lines to allow the dynasty to follow. You will see how everyone is connected! :D
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Postby Clutch on Sat Nov 03, 2007 8:18 am

awesome writeups man! (although I'm offended by the TMac < Kobe comment ;) ); love the Chara/Tyson flashbacks; i'll need to go back and read the full story soon when it's nasty outside and all i feel like doing is chillin' with a good book
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Postby Its_asdf on Sun Nov 04, 2007 5:43 am

Screw Kobe, it's all about Javaris Crittenton baby!
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Postby Lamrock on Sun Nov 04, 2007 11:32 am

Oh yeah; I totally forgot about Reshawn's story. Poor guy. What variation of Shawn is his dad's name? :P

Also, is this the end of the Sit story?
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Postby Mark. on Sun Nov 04, 2007 1:45 pm

Great read dude, I finally got the forums to load so I could get up to date.
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Postby Fresh8 on Sun Nov 04, 2007 10:11 pm

asdf wrote:Screw Kobe, it's all about Javaris Crittenton baby!


In Kobe, I still trust. :D

Lamrock wrote:Oh yeah; I totally forgot about Reshawn's story. Poor guy. What variation of Shawn is his dad's name? Razz

Also, is this the end of the Sit story?


Hmmm, I don't know what I should name his dad haha...

Ok, the ending to the first story should have been as follows:

- Chara would wind up being the number 1 overall draft pick
- Ty would be picked by Minny with the 3rd pick... which woulda been a huge gamble and Sit would have traded for Rocky
- The story was to end with Sit meeting his hero Kobe Bryant at LAX as Kobe flies to join Team USA practise and Sit flies somewhere while meanwhile in a gym somewhere, Ty is practicing alone...

Of course, we gotta throw all that out the window cause the circumstances have changed... Will Sit be in this one? Time will tell.

And my man, I read your post in my old friend and thanks for your kind words. :D Actually makes all the time writing all this stuff up worthwhile.

Mark. wrote:Great read dude, I finally got the forums to load so I could get up to date.


Thanks man. How bout them Gunners? 2-2 isn't too bad :D
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Postby Fresh8 on Sun Nov 04, 2007 10:28 pm

asdf wrote:Screw Kobe, it's all about Javaris Crittenton baby!


In Kobe, I still trust. :D

Lamrock wrote:Oh yeah; I totally forgot about Reshawn's story. Poor guy. What variation of Shawn is his dad's name? Razz

Also, is this the end of the Sit story?


Hmmm, I don't know what I should name his dad haha...

Ok, the ending to the first story should have been as follows:

- Chara would wind up being the number 1 overall draft pick
- Ty would be picked by Minny with the 3rd pick... which woulda been a huge gamble and Sit would have traded for Rocky
- The story was to end with Sit meeting his hero Kobe Bryant at LAX as Kobe flies to join Team USA practise and Sit flies somewhere while meanwhile in a gym somewhere, Ty is practicing alone...

Of course, we gotta throw all that out the window cause the circumstances have changed... Will Sit be in this one? Time will tell.

And my man, I read your post in my old friend and thanks for your kind words. :D Actually makes all the time writing all this stuff up worthwhile.

Mark. wrote:Great read dude, I finally got the forums to load so I could get up to date.


Thanks man. How bout them Gunners? 2-2 isn't too bad :D
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Postby Lamrock on Mon Nov 05, 2007 5:46 pm

I just spent a good part of the day re-reading Part 1. Truly amazing stuff. I demand the return of Will Sit!
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Postby Clutch on Mon Nov 05, 2007 7:01 pm

the Tyson story is tyyyyght!

he got issues, but that makes for a more interesting Hero (Y)
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