dadamafia wrote:In regards to composition I will look at one piece specifically which is the charcoal still life with 4 glasses. The first thing you have to look at is how your eyes flow over the paper. Its good to give the viewer something for their eyes to follow (which covers the contents on the page) in your piece. You have the 4 glasses basically in the four corner which leaves the center of the page blank. Best to avoid blank spaces if there is no reason/purpose for it. Better usage of the paper regarding positioning could help it greatly. Also I dont know if the glasses should be the same size but if they are the perspective is a bit off as the ones closer are smaller than the ones in the back. The shadows also kinda off since if its the ame light source there should be more consistency in their direction.
Jackal wrote:Is the first one of someone real? If so, I'd so fong her.
Tony wrote:hijacking time!
from way way back, the stuff i did.
http://th-x.deviantart.com
just to agree with what's been said up above. pencil pwns.
what i'm doing now may be a bit more elaborate, and will have it's own thread, to share with everyone who may still remember me around here.
Amphatoast wrote:any why were you a bio major when your talent lied in art?
well, when I really like something that I'm doing, I seriously OBSESS over it and after I finish, I look at it and find something else to fix. some of this stuff I did at work and it would take me a few 4 hour shifts to finish. it all depends on your pace and how fast/slow you like to work.
hijacking time!
from way way back, the stuff i did.
http://th-x.deviantart.com
just to agree with what's been said up above. pencil pwns. Thumbs Up
what i'm doing now may be a bit more elaborate, and will have it's own thread, to share with everyone who may still remember me around here.
um, just growing up in an Asian household... pressure to make lots of money. I realized in college that it's all superficial and it's not worth the time. My grandma always told me to "study hard in school so you can get good grades so you can grow up to be a doctor and buy a big house with 5 bedrooms go I can get a room" (all in Chinese, of course)
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um, just growing up in an Asian household... pressure to make lots of money. I realized in college that it's all superficial and it's not worth the time. My grandma always told me to "study hard in school so you can get good grades so you can grow up to be a doctor and buy a big house with 5 bedrooms go I can get a room" (all in Chinese, of course)
Same, same. Parents told me to go to science or business to find those top tier jobs to make money. Which I never really bothered with. I just hate it when Asian parents force their kids to study something when they're sometimes not even really interested in.
Cloudy wrote:Damn I hate shading...I'll show you my try of NBA player's headshot when I'm done
Thanks btw
Cloudy wrote:Hello, you inspired me to draw my first ever drawing of a person.. I have no idea about proportions and just a little about perspectives... Here it is, I'm not shy to show it... It's gonna get better, because I love it![]()
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