I'd never bang any girl named Chinky though.
A Long Short Story [e-novel]CHAPTER 19 kent's nYt OuT
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by Jackal_ on Wed Jul 06, 2005 5:28 pm
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
I fucking told you so! Chinky pulls the pants down and reveals she is really a man named Chang! Then Kentaru makes Chang his new butt friend!
Mac you sick bastard, just make sure I don't get stuck with a gross bitch in the gangbang to be.
I fucking told you so! Chinky pulls the pants down and reveals she is really a man named Chang! Then Kentaru makes Chang his new butt friend!
Mac you sick bastard, just make sure I don't get stuck with a gross bitch in the gangbang to be.
Preparation will only take you so far. After that you've got to take a few leaps of faith.
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by COOLmac© on Wed Jul 06, 2005 5:49 pm
wtf? 
calm down guys. artistic mind in the making here!
alwyas remember the great quote:
"Artificial intelligence is no match for natural stupidity"
updates for chapter 3 this friday..hold on tight
EDIT: these novels are easy compared to playing my dynasty.imagine if anyone here in the office saw me playing live 2005 in my office!!!! well encoding a story seems to mask my attention to work
calm down guys. artistic mind in the making here!
alwyas remember the great quote:
"Artificial intelligence is no match for natural stupidity"
updates for chapter 3 this friday..hold on tight
EDIT: these novels are easy compared to playing my dynasty.imagine if anyone here in the office saw me playing live 2005 in my office!!!! well encoding a story seems to mask my attention to work
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by Jackal_ on Wed Jul 06, 2005 5:51 pm
COOLmac© wrote:wtf?
calm down guys. artistic mind in the making here!
alwyas remember the great quote:
"Artificial intelligence is no match for natural stupidity"
updates for chapter 3 these friday..hold on tight
Sweet, I think he's hinting for a gangbang.
Preparation will only take you so far. After that you've got to take a few leaps of faith.
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by COOLmac© on Sat Jul 09, 2005 5:00 pm
CHAPTER 3: unto the bedroom
After a few chatter, chinky lead kentaru into the masters bedroom. They both unpack kentaru’s stuff and chinky help him unload some stuff into her table drawer. Kentaru was a bit surprised and asked why is she putting some of his clothes at the drawer.
Kentaru: why are you doing that?
Chinky: doing what?
Kentaru: my things, don’t you have no clue? It is rude to touch men’s stuff and place them in proper order you know.
Chinky: well nope, not that I’m the first one that has ever done this to you, for all I know your mom could have packed your bag mister!
Kentaru: excuse me, but I did all of the packing okay, I don’t need help from you girls, besides I don’t live with my parents anymore, I live alone
Chinky: [grinning] okay whatever. You win this round go ahead and always make your host feel unwanted! [Left the room]
Kentaru make funny faces behind chinky’s back while she is not looking, then kentaru scoop out the bedroom and he saw only one big bed. It surprises him. If he Is unpacking stuff at chinky’s bedroom; which obviously is chinky’s bedroom judging from the stuffed toys and décor of the place, where could he possibly be sleeping? Another question pop to his brain; or where would chinky possibly be sleeping? After a quiet smile he finished unpacking and he went out the door to see where in the world is chinky. He saw her at the kitchen checking out the contents of her refrigerator. Kentaru was looking at her back when chinky notices his presence.
Chinky: so you finished?
Kentaru: well yeah, I mean you, yeah you have a nice cozy room
Chinky: oh so you liked it? Do you want to sleep there?
Kentaru: sleep there?[in awe] No kidding right? At the floor? coz I pretty don’t see a sofa anywhere there at all.
Chinky: no you dumb dumb, In the bed, why? what do you think? A guest as important as you, be sleeping at the floor or in a rugged sofa?
Kentaru; I don’t think so, but what concerns me is where are you going to sleep?
Chinky: in the bed of course, were would I sleep? You have any place in mind?
Kentaru: nope, when you mean bed, it means in my bed, oh in your bed I mean. Yeah that’s it, in our bed [very confused guy here, tomgue tied and lost for words]
Chinky: where else? [grinning] I don’t think you see any more bed around there don’t you? Well in that case it is settled then.
Kentaru: [feeling about like a million dollars right about now] yeah that’s what I’m trying to say all along.
Chinky: very well then, lets go out… I've checked the fridge looks like I really should have gone to the grocer yesterday, there’s no food there. Will you shoulder the bill? [almost exploding into laughter] nah just killing ya!!! You’re my guest Kent. Don’t be such a stiffer, relax will you? Having you here is like once in a lifetime.
Kentaru: [back to the confused state] no no no, I’ll handle the bill. I know a good place at your big mall right around here place, we’ll go there okay.
Chinky: finally! It’s about time you take charge general. Let’s go shall we?
They both left chinky’s apartment at around 8 PM. There was this mall 5 kms away that closes around 10. It was a classy one. Kentaru has been there before and he knew chinky could have been there also, but just in case she hasn't he is taking her there anyway.
What’s bothering kentaru is the sleeping arrangement that chinky sets up for the night. This girl is really something. It has been 3 years since they last saw and spent some time with each other, and kentaru still can’t quiet decipher her mixed signals she is showing him. He doesn’t even know if she has heard that he and his current girl friend is now on cold terms.
After a few chatter, chinky lead kentaru into the masters bedroom. They both unpack kentaru’s stuff and chinky help him unload some stuff into her table drawer. Kentaru was a bit surprised and asked why is she putting some of his clothes at the drawer.
Kentaru: why are you doing that?
Chinky: doing what?
Kentaru: my things, don’t you have no clue? It is rude to touch men’s stuff and place them in proper order you know.
Chinky: well nope, not that I’m the first one that has ever done this to you, for all I know your mom could have packed your bag mister!
Kentaru: excuse me, but I did all of the packing okay, I don’t need help from you girls, besides I don’t live with my parents anymore, I live alone
Chinky: [grinning] okay whatever. You win this round go ahead and always make your host feel unwanted! [Left the room]
Kentaru make funny faces behind chinky’s back while she is not looking, then kentaru scoop out the bedroom and he saw only one big bed. It surprises him. If he Is unpacking stuff at chinky’s bedroom; which obviously is chinky’s bedroom judging from the stuffed toys and décor of the place, where could he possibly be sleeping? Another question pop to his brain; or where would chinky possibly be sleeping? After a quiet smile he finished unpacking and he went out the door to see where in the world is chinky. He saw her at the kitchen checking out the contents of her refrigerator. Kentaru was looking at her back when chinky notices his presence.
Chinky: so you finished?
Kentaru: well yeah, I mean you, yeah you have a nice cozy room
Chinky: oh so you liked it? Do you want to sleep there?
Kentaru: sleep there?[in awe] No kidding right? At the floor? coz I pretty don’t see a sofa anywhere there at all.
Chinky: no you dumb dumb, In the bed, why? what do you think? A guest as important as you, be sleeping at the floor or in a rugged sofa?
Kentaru; I don’t think so, but what concerns me is where are you going to sleep?
Chinky: in the bed of course, were would I sleep? You have any place in mind?
Kentaru: nope, when you mean bed, it means in my bed, oh in your bed I mean. Yeah that’s it, in our bed [very confused guy here, tomgue tied and lost for words]
Chinky: where else? [grinning] I don’t think you see any more bed around there don’t you? Well in that case it is settled then.
Kentaru: [feeling about like a million dollars right about now] yeah that’s what I’m trying to say all along.
Chinky: very well then, lets go out… I've checked the fridge looks like I really should have gone to the grocer yesterday, there’s no food there. Will you shoulder the bill? [almost exploding into laughter] nah just killing ya!!! You’re my guest Kent. Don’t be such a stiffer, relax will you? Having you here is like once in a lifetime.
Kentaru: [back to the confused state] no no no, I’ll handle the bill. I know a good place at your big mall right around here place, we’ll go there okay.
Chinky: finally! It’s about time you take charge general. Let’s go shall we?
They both left chinky’s apartment at around 8 PM. There was this mall 5 kms away that closes around 10. It was a classy one. Kentaru has been there before and he knew chinky could have been there also, but just in case she hasn't he is taking her there anyway.
What’s bothering kentaru is the sleeping arrangement that chinky sets up for the night. This girl is really something. It has been 3 years since they last saw and spent some time with each other, and kentaru still can’t quiet decipher her mixed signals she is showing him. He doesn’t even know if she has heard that he and his current girl friend is now on cold terms.
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by AlwaysWhat,NeverWhy on Sat Jul 09, 2005 9:46 pm
Okay, so when does the alien invasion start?
and BTW, that Kentaru character is one smooth operator...
and BTW, that Kentaru character is one smooth operator...
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by cyanide on Sun Jul 10, 2005 4:07 am
Oh yeah, I can see the sexual tension.
DWeaver, I agree with your sarcasm, and I'd like to add that it's pretty obvious who the dominant one is in the relationship
DWeaver, I agree with your sarcasm, and I'd like to add that it's pretty obvious who the dominant one is in the relationship
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by COOLmac© on Mon Jul 11, 2005 10:48 am
^^^ cool i have about 4 poeple hanging on the endge of their seats for this one. chapter 4 tomorrow. be sure to be there or be square 
cool i have about 4 poeple hanging on the endge of their seats for this one. chapter 4 tomorrow. be sure to be there or be square
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by Jackal_ on Mon Jul 11, 2005 1:53 pm
Mac, lemme guess what happens ok?
Kentaru goes out with Chinky for a bit and they run into this chinese prostitute named kakong. Chinky, Kentaru and Kakong go back the "rent by the hour" motel.
Kakong starts taking off her clothes and Kentaru has a hard on... then kentaru notices that Kakong and Chinky both have weiners. So anyways they go nuts on eachotehr and Kakong passes a famous oriental STD called won-ton-iphlis. Now Kentaru and Chinky must keep their secret from getting out... right??
Kentaru goes out with Chinky for a bit and they run into this chinese prostitute named kakong. Chinky, Kentaru and Kakong go back the "rent by the hour" motel.
Kakong starts taking off her clothes and Kentaru has a hard on... then kentaru notices that Kakong and Chinky both have weiners. So anyways they go nuts on eachotehr and Kakong passes a famous oriental STD called won-ton-iphlis. Now Kentaru and Chinky must keep their secret from getting out... right??
Preparation will only take you so far. After that you've got to take a few leaps of faith.
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by COOLmac© on Tue Jul 12, 2005 1:08 pm
CHAPTER 4: take out
It was nearly 23-minute ride from the taxi; a little bit of traffic a little bit of that. Now Kentaru asked the driver to park them along the roadside where there are road restaurants all over the place.
Chinky asked why would Kentaru wanted them walking around in front of people eating. Kentaru bluntly smiled and said he just wanted to show off how beautiful his companion is in front of the classy public. Chinky just smiled off and raises her eyebrow. Kentaru led her to the south entrance. As soon as they step inside, they noticed the mall’s motif for the day. Dark trim tinted yellow lights simulating the candle glow.
Kent: so this must be what they’re doing to the place during Mondays eh?
Chinky: yeah super!
Kent: super? I never knew you talk like ace.
Chinky: ace….?
Kent: yeah SUPER!!!! Ace Ventura. My fav movie of all time. You know? “take care now, bye bye then” Super!
Chinky: [raising another eyebrow] oh really?
Kent: yeah and you do a pretty cool impression of the ROCK too [grins]
Chinky: the who? Who’s the rock?
Kent:[ sees the grocery store] never mind..just follow me [grabs chinkys hands and led her to the grocery]
Inside, Kentaru bought a box of milk, a mango jam and a bag of chips. Chinky asks why is he buying those stuff. Kentaru replied they’re for supplies. Kentaru forgot some bottled water. He remembers that chinky’s supply back at her pad is almost depleted. He asks her to go on wait in line for the cashier while he gets the bottled water. As soon as Kentaru left, chinky’s celphone rang. It was here close friend Noreen.
Noreen: hey wazzup girl, where are you now? Just got off from work. I was thinking if I could crash at your place you know, maybe grab some pizza and stuff…[haven’t finish talking yet…]
Chinky: hey Noreen, you know what I am not so available right now maybe call me Thursday or Friday, I have company and I’m at Rockwell’s [the mall BTW] with a friend?
Noreen: with whom? Rockwell’s? that’s so saucy of you! Is it a guy?
Chinky: yeah I’ll tell you more about it later, he is coming. Bye gotta go.
Kent: [ just arrived back ] well I can see you’re busy falling in line, where do you want to eat?
Chinky: pizza!!!???[remembering noreen’s suggestion]
Kent: cool. I love pizza
Chinky: but wait since we are carrying half a gallon of water and some snacks why won’t we order take out. Go back to my place and finished the pie there. That way we can enjoy talking and die laughing without all of these classy people staring back at us. [smiles rather innocently]
Kent: [lost for words] well okay, sounds like a great idea. After we finish paying these stuff up we’ll visit the pizza parlor and chow back at your place.
Chinky: super!
Kentaru brought Chinky to the nearest and only pizza parlor at the second floor. Along the way they saw the acoustic live performances at the mall’s fountain area. Kentaru stood a while and checked out the lovely chic singing.
Chinky: she looks fine huh?
Kentaru: yeah…I mean not that fine really. Not much compared to someone I know. [laughs innocently]
Chinky: yeah right. Can we get a move on?
The pizza was ordered and they were both walking along the hallway with a few bags and a box of pizza.
Kent: funny all the other people walking around, carrying shopping stuff all except food. And here we are with a pizza a 2-liter water jug and a few chips. [decided to swing his head and saw Chinky wasn’t there]
Chinky: [eyes bulging at a certain cakes and pastries store] hey Kent, take a look at that chocolate and vanilla coated cake…hmmm looks yummy isn’t it?
Kent:[approaching] (now what?) yeah looks tasty to the stomach, hehehe just joking, you sure we can take that down with this pizza around.
Chinky: dumb dumb, I have a fridge. Besides it will be a long talk tonight, let’s take it out please[begging like for her life]
Kent: okay okay, I’m going in there. Wait for me by the exit wing, grab a taxi while you’re at it, looks like you’re pretty good doing those things. [goes inside to buy the chocolate devils cake with vanilla coating]
After a minute or two, Kentaru arrives. They rode a taxi and they were on their way back to the apartment.
It was nearly 23-minute ride from the taxi; a little bit of traffic a little bit of that. Now Kentaru asked the driver to park them along the roadside where there are road restaurants all over the place.
Chinky asked why would Kentaru wanted them walking around in front of people eating. Kentaru bluntly smiled and said he just wanted to show off how beautiful his companion is in front of the classy public. Chinky just smiled off and raises her eyebrow. Kentaru led her to the south entrance. As soon as they step inside, they noticed the mall’s motif for the day. Dark trim tinted yellow lights simulating the candle glow.
Kent: so this must be what they’re doing to the place during Mondays eh?
Chinky: yeah super!
Kent: super? I never knew you talk like ace.
Chinky: ace….?
Kent: yeah SUPER!!!! Ace Ventura. My fav movie of all time. You know? “take care now, bye bye then” Super!
Chinky: [raising another eyebrow] oh really?
Kent: yeah and you do a pretty cool impression of the ROCK too [grins]
Chinky: the who? Who’s the rock?
Kent:[ sees the grocery store] never mind..just follow me [grabs chinkys hands and led her to the grocery]
Inside, Kentaru bought a box of milk, a mango jam and a bag of chips. Chinky asks why is he buying those stuff. Kentaru replied they’re for supplies. Kentaru forgot some bottled water. He remembers that chinky’s supply back at her pad is almost depleted. He asks her to go on wait in line for the cashier while he gets the bottled water. As soon as Kentaru left, chinky’s celphone rang. It was here close friend Noreen.
Noreen: hey wazzup girl, where are you now? Just got off from work. I was thinking if I could crash at your place you know, maybe grab some pizza and stuff…[haven’t finish talking yet…]
Chinky: hey Noreen, you know what I am not so available right now maybe call me Thursday or Friday, I have company and I’m at Rockwell’s [the mall BTW] with a friend?
Noreen: with whom? Rockwell’s? that’s so saucy of you! Is it a guy?
Chinky: yeah I’ll tell you more about it later, he is coming. Bye gotta go.
Kent: [ just arrived back ] well I can see you’re busy falling in line, where do you want to eat?
Chinky: pizza!!!???[remembering noreen’s suggestion]
Kent: cool. I love pizza
Chinky: but wait since we are carrying half a gallon of water and some snacks why won’t we order take out. Go back to my place and finished the pie there. That way we can enjoy talking and die laughing without all of these classy people staring back at us. [smiles rather innocently]
Kent: [lost for words] well okay, sounds like a great idea. After we finish paying these stuff up we’ll visit the pizza parlor and chow back at your place.
Chinky: super!
Kentaru brought Chinky to the nearest and only pizza parlor at the second floor. Along the way they saw the acoustic live performances at the mall’s fountain area. Kentaru stood a while and checked out the lovely chic singing.
Chinky: she looks fine huh?
Kentaru: yeah…I mean not that fine really. Not much compared to someone I know. [laughs innocently]
Chinky: yeah right. Can we get a move on?
The pizza was ordered and they were both walking along the hallway with a few bags and a box of pizza.
Kent: funny all the other people walking around, carrying shopping stuff all except food. And here we are with a pizza a 2-liter water jug and a few chips. [decided to swing his head and saw Chinky wasn’t there]
Chinky: [eyes bulging at a certain cakes and pastries store] hey Kent, take a look at that chocolate and vanilla coated cake…hmmm looks yummy isn’t it?
Kent:[approaching] (now what?) yeah looks tasty to the stomach, hehehe just joking, you sure we can take that down with this pizza around.
Chinky: dumb dumb, I have a fridge. Besides it will be a long talk tonight, let’s take it out please[begging like for her life]
Kent: okay okay, I’m going in there. Wait for me by the exit wing, grab a taxi while you’re at it, looks like you’re pretty good doing those things. [goes inside to buy the chocolate devils cake with vanilla coating]
After a minute or two, Kentaru arrives. They rode a taxi and they were on their way back to the apartment.
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by COOLmac© on Wed Jul 13, 2005 10:41 am
LOL it doesn't hurt if we add a little flava in the story mix now don't we?
EDIT: COOLmac might be busy this week...doctor issues with the GF.... she just called in yesterday and she's 9 days late ........might be a lot of hair pulling going on in the next few days..stay glued and wish me luck 
it doesn't hurt if we add a little flava in the story mix now don't we?
EDIT: COOLmac might be busy this week...doctor issues with the GF.... she just called in yesterday and she's 9 days late
........might be a lot of hair pulling going on in the next few days..stay glued and wish me luck
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by cyanide on Wed Jul 13, 2005 11:40 am
zzzzz... that was an impotent chapter. I hope Chapter 5 picks up!
if you were killed tomorrow, i WOULDNT GO 2 UR FUNERAL CUZ ID B N JAIL 4 KILLIN THE MOTHA FUCKER THAT KILLED U!
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WE TRUE HOMIES
WE RIDE TOGETHER
WE DIE TOGETHER
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...../==o;;;;;;;;______.:/
.....), ---.(_(__) /
....// (..) ), ----"
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by Drex on Wed Jul 13, 2005 1:38 pm
EDIT: COOLmac might be busy this week...doctor issues with the GF.... she just called in yesterday and she's 9 days late ........might be a lot of hair pulling going on in the next few days..stay glued and wish me luck
Óh, shit; please god no...a baby COOLMAC?
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by COOLmac© on Thu Jul 14, 2005 11:30 am
CHAPTER 5: the makeshift dinner
The time is 9:38 PM, kentaru and chinky made their way out from the taxi and into the apartment’s lobby. Along the lobby there was a mini bar with a display of cold drinks. Chinky asked kentaru if he wanted a drink or two, a cold beer perhaps before they move up to her pad.
Kent: no thanks, I don’t drink beers by the way, my belly can’t handle them… well do you want some?
Chinky: nope, I was just thinking if you would like to get maybe a few cans upstairs and have a few drinks.
Kent: nah. The food is fine with me. But if you really wanted too, I can buy you some.
Chinky: [sees the elevator doors open] hey forget about it, let’s go dig in this pizza before it gets cold.
Upstairs, upon entering the room kentaru prepared the sofa and the adjacent table for them to dine in. chinky went ahead in the bedroom to change her clothes. Kentaru was changing channels to see if there is indeed something nice to watch in the tube at this time of hour. All he can come up with are a few lousy news channels. Then chinky made her way out wearing a very big T-shirt, as if a man weighing in 500+ pounds wore it.
Kentaru: wow that’s one hell of a shirt. Now grab unto one of these [gives chinky a slice of pizza] then you’ll prolly end up with a few extra pounds in the morning and you will look a lotta better in that get up of yours [laughs]
Chinky: are you making fun of me? [Bites tenderjously at the pizza]
Kent: nah just messing with you. With that figure of yours I’m betting a lot of girls at your office envy you… oh such slim and ideal figure. I’m guessing that waistline is a whooping 25?
Chinky: I haven’t measure in these past few months, but I’m getting close in there. It’s really 24 on the average and last time out when I was hospitalized I measured in 22-23.
Kent: you in a hospital? Fever?
Chinky: no you dumb dumb, it’s my heart.
Kent: really? I never knew a heartache can lead you to check in a hospital? Was it that serious? Did you slashed your wrist? [Jokingly]
Chinky: you idiot! I don’t have love problems. It’s my heart literally. I have these tiny veins in some part, which stops the correct blood flow in and out in my heart. I have been suffering from it since college; do you remember that you can always see me alongside the hallways near the stairs leaning back against the wall? Those were the times I was catching my breath. I felt like an asthmatic old woman. That’s when I found out that I have a heart disease.
Kent: yeah now I remember [reminisce the times he was talking to chinky back in college] I never thought you were already suffering way back then. No wonder you always look so gloomy.
[THE FOLLOWING CONVERSATION TOOK PLACE 6 YEARS AGO. IN SCHOOL]
Kent:[running to the third floor using the stairs] hey we are going to be late, and I haven’t done my homework yet. Do you happened to have yours done already?
Chinky: [taking out a piece of paper at her notebook] here… *gasp* take it… where’s lorie your girlfriend? Didn’t she make you one? *gasp*
Kent : oh her? Well we have a misunderstanding this morning. Forget about her. I’ll just copy this and we’ll be on our way[copies homework rather rapidly than normal] hey what’s with the face… you sick or something? I saw you this lunchtime eating burgers, oh those burger kings did you good eh? [laughs but returns much attention to copying chinky’s paper]
Chinky: I don’t know *gasp* for some strange reason I can’t breathe right.
Kent: prolly allergy! [finished copying the last sentences] not to worry I’ll take you to the clinic after the period. Thanks for the assignment, you really are a life saver [returns chinky’s assignment]
[END OF 6 YEARS AGO SCENE]
chinky: yeah and you never did take me to the clinic, you parasite!!!
Kent: well sorry ms.host just happen that I have so many other priorities back then. I have a gang, a gf, a car and a good reputation to cover… just that you weren’t in the picture back then yet. Not like now… wow you are the secretary of my future partner corporation who might sponsor our company back in the province.
Chiny: yeah parasite!!! [walks to get her glass of milk]
Kentaru: you know something chin, you look kinda blooming. Any new guy yet in your busy life?
Chinky: what did you say? A new guy? As if I have a guy! Well I have so many crushes at the moment that I don’t want to involve my self to any new guy.
Kent: just what do you mean by that? You want that new guy to be one out in your crush pool?
Chinky: [offers kentaru a glass of milk] not really. Just that when I feel them getting close to me, I just happen to lose interest with them fast! And I mean really fast!!!
Kentaru: sigh, you are a player!
After enough chat for almost an hour, kentaru cleans up the table and decided to have a nice hot bath. Chinky was left alone in the bedroom and was staring bluntly at kentaru’s stuff in the shelf, most notably his cell phone…
The time is 9:38 PM, kentaru and chinky made their way out from the taxi and into the apartment’s lobby. Along the lobby there was a mini bar with a display of cold drinks. Chinky asked kentaru if he wanted a drink or two, a cold beer perhaps before they move up to her pad.
Kent: no thanks, I don’t drink beers by the way, my belly can’t handle them… well do you want some?
Chinky: nope, I was just thinking if you would like to get maybe a few cans upstairs and have a few drinks.
Kent: nah. The food is fine with me. But if you really wanted too, I can buy you some.
Chinky: [sees the elevator doors open] hey forget about it, let’s go dig in this pizza before it gets cold.
Upstairs, upon entering the room kentaru prepared the sofa and the adjacent table for them to dine in. chinky went ahead in the bedroom to change her clothes. Kentaru was changing channels to see if there is indeed something nice to watch in the tube at this time of hour. All he can come up with are a few lousy news channels. Then chinky made her way out wearing a very big T-shirt, as if a man weighing in 500+ pounds wore it.
Kentaru: wow that’s one hell of a shirt. Now grab unto one of these [gives chinky a slice of pizza] then you’ll prolly end up with a few extra pounds in the morning and you will look a lotta better in that get up of yours [laughs]
Chinky: are you making fun of me? [Bites tenderjously at the pizza]
Kent: nah just messing with you. With that figure of yours I’m betting a lot of girls at your office envy you… oh such slim and ideal figure. I’m guessing that waistline is a whooping 25?
Chinky: I haven’t measure in these past few months, but I’m getting close in there. It’s really 24 on the average and last time out when I was hospitalized I measured in 22-23.
Kent: you in a hospital? Fever?
Chinky: no you dumb dumb, it’s my heart.
Kent: really? I never knew a heartache can lead you to check in a hospital? Was it that serious? Did you slashed your wrist? [Jokingly]
Chinky: you idiot! I don’t have love problems. It’s my heart literally. I have these tiny veins in some part, which stops the correct blood flow in and out in my heart. I have been suffering from it since college; do you remember that you can always see me alongside the hallways near the stairs leaning back against the wall? Those were the times I was catching my breath. I felt like an asthmatic old woman. That’s when I found out that I have a heart disease.
Kent: yeah now I remember [reminisce the times he was talking to chinky back in college] I never thought you were already suffering way back then. No wonder you always look so gloomy.
[THE FOLLOWING CONVERSATION TOOK PLACE 6 YEARS AGO. IN SCHOOL]
Kent:[running to the third floor using the stairs] hey we are going to be late, and I haven’t done my homework yet. Do you happened to have yours done already?
Chinky: [taking out a piece of paper at her notebook] here… *gasp* take it… where’s lorie your girlfriend? Didn’t she make you one? *gasp*
Kent : oh her? Well we have a misunderstanding this morning. Forget about her. I’ll just copy this and we’ll be on our way[copies homework rather rapidly than normal] hey what’s with the face… you sick or something? I saw you this lunchtime eating burgers, oh those burger kings did you good eh? [laughs but returns much attention to copying chinky’s paper]
Chinky: I don’t know *gasp* for some strange reason I can’t breathe right.
Kent: prolly allergy! [finished copying the last sentences] not to worry I’ll take you to the clinic after the period. Thanks for the assignment, you really are a life saver [returns chinky’s assignment]
[END OF 6 YEARS AGO SCENE]
chinky: yeah and you never did take me to the clinic, you parasite!!!
Kent: well sorry ms.host just happen that I have so many other priorities back then. I have a gang, a gf, a car and a good reputation to cover… just that you weren’t in the picture back then yet. Not like now… wow you are the secretary of my future partner corporation who might sponsor our company back in the province.
Chiny: yeah parasite!!! [walks to get her glass of milk]
Kentaru: you know something chin, you look kinda blooming. Any new guy yet in your busy life?
Chinky: what did you say? A new guy? As if I have a guy! Well I have so many crushes at the moment that I don’t want to involve my self to any new guy.
Kent: just what do you mean by that? You want that new guy to be one out in your crush pool?
Chinky: [offers kentaru a glass of milk] not really. Just that when I feel them getting close to me, I just happen to lose interest with them fast! And I mean really fast!!!
Kentaru: sigh, you are a player!
After enough chat for almost an hour, kentaru cleans up the table and decided to have a nice hot bath. Chinky was left alone in the bedroom and was staring bluntly at kentaru’s stuff in the shelf, most notably his cell phone…
MY FORUMS [u pinoy? go here!]/YES COOLmac's WHITEmen DYNASTY!!!
coolmac's weekly random lyrics #23 I'm dumb she's a lesbian. i thought i have found the one
coolmac's law of plain logical events #479 use common sense, you need to sleep to live
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by AlwaysWhat,NeverWhy on Thu Jul 14, 2005 7:06 pm
Kentaru: sigh, you are a player!
Okay, this guy is in serious trouble... what kind of lines are that? Have him call Dr. Ruth...
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by COOLmac© on Fri Jul 15, 2005 10:18 am
finally i made a character worth criticizing for
MY FORUMS [u pinoy? go here!]/YES COOLmac's WHITEmen DYNASTY!!!
coolmac's weekly random lyrics #23 I'm dumb she's a lesbian. i thought i have found the one
coolmac's law of plain logical events #479 use common sense, you need to sleep to live
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by COOLmac© on Mon Jul 18, 2005 12:27 pm
chapter 6 up for grabs tomorrow.....
i would appreciate if you guys give your expectations or suggestions aside from porn stuff the "E" in the e-novel doesnt mean erotic guys....sorry about that
i would appreciate if you guys give your expectations or suggestions aside from porn stuff
the "E" in the e-novel doesnt mean erotic guys....sorry about that
MY FORUMS [u pinoy? go here!]/YES COOLmac's WHITEmen DYNASTY!!!
coolmac's weekly random lyrics #23 I'm dumb she's a lesbian. i thought i have found the one
coolmac's law of plain logical events #479 use common sense, you need to sleep to live
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by J@3 on Mon Jul 18, 2005 2:26 pm
Can Chinky be revealed to be a man? Then Kentaru leaves the house in a shock while Chinky is at home crying. Thirty minutes later, Kentaru returns and professes his love for Chinky. They then have lots of transexual sex before Kentaru leaves again with a note that says "CYA".
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