From the two you've shown me, I liked the first design more, it's more complex but not too complex either. I was a bit uncomfortable with the teeth though, well fangs whatever, they seem not really joined to the rest of the head. Other than that it's nice.
Here are some logo's to get you an idea as to what I would like to see if possible, not exactly like it but so that you get an idea, I'll post them in a sequence of my preference:
I tend to associate the word Jackal with how I tend to describe myself, dark, sinister & unforgiving.
I like darkish green/blue. Black should dominate though, tints of dark green/blue would be welcomed too (see the previous sig I had, the Predator one).
Regarding text, if you could work in "Jackal" (duh) in a genial way, that'd be awesome too, so not just like smack right there in the middle but something...different.
About the bordering, something circelish would be nice. Like the second or third logo that I showed up there, it's not per se a final form, thus triangle, circel or square, it's different yet appealing to the eye. (Mine atleast.)
Anyways, I can't express how thankful I am to you for even attempting this, I'll probably have this signature/avatar with me for a long long time, as I've had the Jackal nickname for ages now.
Oh, I also tend to associate the word Jackal with the movie The Jackal. With Bruce Willis & Richard Gere, where Willis is portrayed as a bad guy to the bone, ruthless & ofcourse, unforgiving. But naturally.
So from what I can tell you at the moment, I tend to lean towards the darker, more evil, more...psychotic side of the world. Hope this helps in any way possible. If you have more questions, ask them, the more you ask the more I can explain I suppose.
This is exactly what I've been looking for btw, a trademark sort of thing, not a sig of a NBA Player who I tire of, something of my own.
To the folks that might've gotten tired of me spamming up this thread, apologies.
Mercury, thanks once again.
