A Long Short Story [e-novel]CHAPTER 19 kent's nYt OuT

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what d'you think?

Poll ended at Tue Jul 19, 2005 3:59 pm

mmmm okay i guess
3
23%
this is the gayest thing in all NLSC forum
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69%
i'm dumbstruck and speechless
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8%
 
Total votes : 13

Postby COOLmac© on Mon Oct 03, 2005 12:20 pm

Chapter 19: walks the lonely road

Kentaru walks outside. Bringing only his cell and a few measly dollars. He stumbled upon a few lovers at the walk being sweet and all. He saw this nice Pub a few meters away from the building. He headed there looking for a few shots of gin to kill time away. He wanted to be sleeping past midnight. As he entered there were quiet a number of people already there, chilling the night out.
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Kent: [sits at the bar] hello. Gin on the rocks pls. [Notices another woman waitress]

Waitress: ya what up? You look new around here. [Prepares the drink]

Kent: just got here 2 days ago. The first thing I notices is this place have a whole lotta of girl bar tenders.[laughs]
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Waitress: well that’s because we kick your balls to have this job [handed the drink] what’s your name by the way stranger? Me here is Missy, Missy Miss for long.

Kent: well that’s new, hi I’m kent. Kentaru for long. What’s news from this place?

Missy: nothing much a guy with your looks can handle [proceeded to the next customer]

Kentaru just laugh it out. He started to look around the bar. He notices not everyone is looking friendly, as they watch the soccer game at the large screen TV at the monitor. Along one dark table he notices a familiar face. Damn it was Jerry, he got some men around 5 of them drinking smoking and laughing out. There were 2 girls too. looks like some hookers to kentaru’s taste, one was giving Jerry a massage. Kentaru blends in the bar crowd as so he can’t be seen nor be noticed by Jerry. The peeps that are with Jerry don’t look like businessmen or executives at all. They all look like thugs. Kentaru grab his phone, locks in his ear peace and dials his partner back in the province.
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Kent: yo Paul you awake? [hears loud music in the background]

Paul: yo wazzup, cause I am wide-awake!

Kent: yeah I can tell. Hey what’s the 117 on the guy named Jerry I told you about?

Paul: well I left the folder at the other car, but from what the boys have gather this fellow Jerry? Jerry right? He got issues man. I’ll fill you in about this tomorrow okay?

Kent: 1040 on that dude, he’s in my vicinity and I have visuals. Could be better if I give it a few snoops around wouldn’t it?

Paul: where the hell is chinky? You with her dude? Okay its up to you, just bust me a call if you need anything. I’ll be at the parking lot by 10 AM tomorrow, don’t sleep on that one okay? Paul out!

Kent: kent out.

Kent sip on his drink and decides to wait a few more minutes till he plans his surveillance move on Jerry.
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Postby COOLmac© on Thu Oct 06, 2005 6:12 pm

guess we will neverget to see the ending. can i just mail the story to one of my pals here for them to post the final 18 chapters or so?

oh well :roll:
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